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A Passage
Stars pass through
at a distance,
the things
in the woods,
so familiar is
the time,
I wake in the night
with a wild love.
at a distance,
the things
in the woods,
so familiar is
the time,
I wake in the night
with a wild love.
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Re: A Passage
13th Dec 2014 3:51pm
Re: A Passage
13th Dec 2014 4:36pm
A passage through time and space, what a beautiful way to express love, dear Pish.
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re: Re: A Passage
14th Dec 2014 7:10pm
Re: A Passage
13th Dec 2014 6:05pm
Re: A Passage
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13th Dec 2014 8:29pm
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Re: A Passage
Anonymous
14th Dec 2014 00:34am
keeping love near and keeping love away, is dream of love real or the awakened state.. nice thought...
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re: Re: A Passage
14th Dec 2014 8:32pm
Re: A Passage
14th Dec 2014 6:09am
James Wright observed nature from a hammock at Duffy's farm (probably really taking it in for the 1st time) & realized, at the end of the poem, 'I have wasted my life.'...
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re: Re: A Passage
14th Dec 2014 7:04pm
I love that simplistic style of using your surroundings, and in such a peaceful state of mind. Thank you so much, John, for that awesome comment.
Re: A Passage
14th Dec 2014 6:14am
Re: A Passage
16th Dec 2014 5:28am
Elegant and serene...
Enjoyed, Reita. I'm a sucker for a short poem...
Enjoyed, Reita. I'm a sucker for a short poem...
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