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Collar Pains

They fucked to take their
minds off
eating.

jadielue

Written by jadielue

(Jade.)

Published 28th Apr 2011

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Anonymous

28th Apr 2011 11:22am

Excellent. As soon as I got it I fell in love with it. Like a music box you can't quite open at first and then, voila.

:)

30th Apr 2011 3:36pm

Short but sweet. Loved it. Sounds like a riddle.

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rayheinrich (Death Plane for Teddy)

2nd May 2011 7:53am

more middle than riddle :)
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