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Hung for the moon
yearning words slither
through the boundries
of safe thoughts
melting the innocence
into dark surroundings
unspoken words
hold you in the moonlight
my shadows yielding blades
of the edges of lunar rays
cutting away layers
exposing you to the night
whispers ferment
from the foggy mist
that rolls across chilled skin
forcing steps
to shiver within my midst
I stalk around my prey
tracing my nails across
a heavy breathing chest
as extended nipples turn
only to linger longer
as my nails mounded
across the milky needy crest
a crushing force
crumble your fragile knee
as powerful grips
lock into your twists
controlling your descent
into your dirty plea
weeping willows
swaying in the breeze
offering burning flesh
pain and pleasure
erotic trapeze
crawl my darling
into my wilderness
feel the extentions of life
reaching to touch
your tenderness
Into a small opening
littered with flickering
dying candle light expose
shredded leather
from tree to tree
I pick you from the dirt
and kiss you faithfully
you hung the moon for me
fall limp into my arms
and trust me
dangle to the moon
as roots below feed
drips of blood lust
fall trembling from lips
that feel me
whispering
whimpering
please
never let go
forever let me rest
in the night light
swaying in the embrace
of your darkness
all night
through the boundries
of safe thoughts
melting the innocence
into dark surroundings
unspoken words
hold you in the moonlight
my shadows yielding blades
of the edges of lunar rays
cutting away layers
exposing you to the night
whispers ferment
from the foggy mist
that rolls across chilled skin
forcing steps
to shiver within my midst
I stalk around my prey
tracing my nails across
a heavy breathing chest
as extended nipples turn
only to linger longer
as my nails mounded
across the milky needy crest
a crushing force
crumble your fragile knee
as powerful grips
lock into your twists
controlling your descent
into your dirty plea
weeping willows
swaying in the breeze
offering burning flesh
pain and pleasure
erotic trapeze
crawl my darling
into my wilderness
feel the extentions of life
reaching to touch
your tenderness
Into a small opening
littered with flickering
dying candle light expose
shredded leather
from tree to tree
I pick you from the dirt
and kiss you faithfully
you hung the moon for me
fall limp into my arms
and trust me
dangle to the moon
as roots below feed
drips of blood lust
fall trembling from lips
that feel me
whispering
whimpering
please
never let go
forever let me rest
in the night light
swaying in the embrace
of your darkness
all night
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Re: Hung for the moon
10th Dec 2014 3:09am
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11th Dec 2014 00:28am
Re: Hung for the moon
10th Dec 2014 3:18am
re: Re: Hung for the moon
11th Dec 2014 00:33am
Lovely Crim, your sips open dominate drips leave pleasing marks of Crimson gifts.
Re: Hung for the moon
Anonymous
10th Dec 2014 6:23am
Bravo AS......stunning sensual write......luv this......RL for me..xo :)
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re: Re: Hung for the moon
11th Dec 2014 00:33am
Re: Hung for the moon
Anonymous
10th Dec 2014 9:31am
Darkly romantic, erotic to the core, crawl my darling into my wilderness...I particularly love this line. You have a special way with words.
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re: Re: Hung for the moon
11th Dec 2014 00:35am
Re: Hung for the moon
10th Dec 2014 4:46pm
Hanging onto weeping branches
Begging for those nails to linger
In hidden longing places
Never letting go
Feeling each scratch to the core
Perfection AS...I would expect nothing less
Begging for those nails to linger
In hidden longing places
Never letting go
Feeling each scratch to the core
Perfection AS...I would expect nothing less
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re: Re: Hung for the moon
15th Dec 2014 2:05am
Re: Hung for the moon
13th Dec 2014 3:12pm
re: Re: Hung for the moon
15th Dec 2014 2:09am
Always kind, always special. You my dear must inspire daily.
Thank you always
Thank you always
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16th Dec 2014 2:59am
Re: Hung for the moon
13th Dec 2014 8:02pm
This was Absolutely Enchanting...passionately powerful yet so delicately worded...well crafted scribe!!
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re: Re: Hung for the moon
15th Dec 2014 2:10am
Enchanted by the sweet words of PoeticDesire. What more could I ever ask for. Thank you
Re: Hung for the moon
15th Dec 2014 4:14am
despondant & desolate. vampiric lovers lingering under that suspicious moon...
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20th May 2015 00:18am
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20th May 2015 00:17am
Re: Hung for the moon
23rd Mar 2015 00:45am
This...is simply amazing. I hung on every word as she hung that moon for you. Wonderfully brilliant!
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re: Re: Hung for the moon
24th Mar 2015 2:49am
Thank you very much, the Storm is always welcome to drench me with your blessings.
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24th Mar 2015 8:27am
Re: Hung for the moon
16th May 2015 3:04am
He conquers her deliciously. It's a sexy one that makes you tremble. She is at his mercy. Nicely written. :)
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re: Re: Hung for the moon
20th May 2015 00:28am
Goddess radiance flecks from deep blue aura casting into eyes that are held, captivating me
Pondering how am I worthy to stand
In the shadows of you
Blue Angel
A poets fantasy
Thank you always
Pondering how am I worthy to stand
In the shadows of you
Blue Angel
A poets fantasy
Thank you always
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14th Jul 2015 4:28am
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15th Jul 2015 00:39am
Re: Hung for the moon
15th Jul 2015 2:50am
Crawl my darling into my wilderness. Purrrfucked line. Seductive and ruthless, yet somehow kind. Love. 💋
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Re. Hung for the moon
2nd Feb 2016 3:57am
Substance and the art of sustaining ..
I am absolutely .. breathless right now,
read of this offline but had to come
and say how appreciative I am for this
piece.
It's almost a rarity. Humbly excited.
-Howlings
I am absolutely .. breathless right now,
read of this offline but had to come
and say how appreciative I am for this
piece.
It's almost a rarity. Humbly excited.
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Hung for the moon
9th Feb 2016 2:08am
Thank you Howling for the comment and appreciate the value of your time especially that they are rare.