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Lay With Me
I long to lay by your side
In the dark velvet of nightfall
Feeling your heartbeat in sync with mine
The moist warmth of your breath on my neck
Crawl under these cool satin sheets
Getting as close as two can be
Our bodies turning into one
So full of passion and trust
Roaming hands seeking out heaven
Pleasure beyond anything known before
Impossible to find with another
Once you have been touched by a force such as this
Hungered lips begging for a taste
Craving every inch of you
Needing the saltiness of your skin
I want to get lost in your sinful scent
In the dark velvet of nightfall
Feeling your heartbeat in sync with mine
The moist warmth of your breath on my neck
Crawl under these cool satin sheets
Getting as close as two can be
Our bodies turning into one
So full of passion and trust
Roaming hands seeking out heaven
Pleasure beyond anything known before
Impossible to find with another
Once you have been touched by a force such as this
Hungered lips begging for a taste
Craving every inch of you
Needing the saltiness of your skin
I want to get lost in your sinful scent
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Re: Lay With Me
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5th Dec 2014 8:34pm
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9th Dec 2014 3:02pm
Re: Lay With Me
5th Dec 2014 8:41pm
Sinful scent indeed, making our senses come alive sweet Southern Belle.
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9th Dec 2014 3:08pm
My dear AS I'm as sweet as southern honeysuckles gun
Glad u liked my lil write
Glad u liked my lil write
Re: Lay With Me
5th Dec 2014 9:13pm
Both sensual and beautiful. "Roaming hands seeking out heaven." I think I've found it, Belle.
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9th Dec 2014 4:11pm
Oh Crow gun
Ty so very much
Glad u enjoy the way I scribble my thoughts down darlin
Ty so very much
Glad u enjoy the way I scribble my thoughts down darlin
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5th Dec 2014 9:24pm
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5th Dec 2014 10:35pm
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Re: Lay With Me
5th Dec 2014 10:46pm
Wistful, rare passion and connection
declared herein, Ms Belle.
Few ever experience it's reality.
Some think it a myth.
Those who know and seek, find. :)
Outstanding work!
declared herein, Ms Belle.
Few ever experience it's reality.
Some think it a myth.
Those who know and seek, find. :)
Outstanding work!
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9th Dec 2014 4:16pm
The one thing more sad than never finding it Mr Vegas is finding it n losing way too quickly. It can b so hard to move on
Re: Lay With Me
6th Dec 2014 00:52am
that's a tempting offer from a Southern Seductress. you know how to arouse us...
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9th Dec 2014 4:32pm
Oh do I Mr Feddeler? Quite the compliment coming from u. Lords knows u know how to pull ur readers n with it own seductive pen
Re: Lay With Me
9th Dec 2014 1:53pm
Words every man longs to hear. This pumps up the ego and engorges the labido. Naughty and Nice.
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9th Dec 2014 4:37pm
I only speak from my heart gun
Hoping my words fall on the right ears
Thanks so much X
Hoping my words fall on the right ears
Thanks so much X