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"Comprehend"
Time passes quickly
Precious seconds escape
Why then do we not hear
When our spirit speaks, refining fate
We must listen, be aware
There are but few second chances
In life, love, work and happiness
Realize, recognize, time enhances
Each embrace, every tick of the clock
Live each moment as if it were the last
Explore every opportunity, learn
What awaits those who keep their nets cast
With attention wholly given, observing in detail
Eyes, ears and spirit open to all things social
For through triumph, trial, and assisting others
We share, grow, expand, comprehend in total
*December 4, 2012*
Published 4th Dec 2014
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Anonymous
5th Dec 2014 5:32am
Sweet EV.....this is a stunning piece.....I've really enjoyed the message to cherish souls......never walk away from a moment that could be shared......beautiful write my friend.....xo :)
5th Dec 2014 10:03pm
My sincere gratitude for your gracious remarks, ES.
You get it. Share. :)
xo
I wrote this two years ago, recently modified it a bit
but decided the original should stand on it's own. :)
You get it. Share. :)
xo
I wrote this two years ago, recently modified it a bit
but decided the original should stand on it's own. :)
5th Dec 2014 4:54pm
Mr Vegas this truly spoke to me on so many levels.
Such a beautiful n insightful write
It says so much about the soul of the author
Such a beautiful n insightful write
It says so much about the soul of the author
5th Dec 2014 10:11pm
Ms Belle, thank you for your kind, encouraging words.
Honored to be among your RL selections.
I'm not certain what nor how "much" it "says"
regarding "the soul of the author."
Hopefully, it reveals just a touch of exploration,
observation and participation. :)
Honored to be among your RL selections.
I'm not certain what nor how "much" it "says"
regarding "the soul of the author."
Hopefully, it reveals just a touch of exploration,
observation and participation. :)
5th Dec 2014 4:56pm
you are so intelligent Chad and in tune with life great advise in this write beautiful with love Brenda :)
5th Dec 2014 10:22pm
Brenda, your flattering comments humble me.
Many will argue the opposite of "so intelligent"
and "in tune ..." :)
Your compliments and appreciation are very meaningful.
Love, back at ya. :)
Thank you,
Chad
Many will argue the opposite of "so intelligent"
and "in tune ..." :)
Your compliments and appreciation are very meaningful.
Love, back at ya. :)
Thank you,
Chad
