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Re: Shadows
Anonymous
26th Nov 2014 9:12pm
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re: Re: Shadows
26th Nov 2014 9:41pm
By my clearest hour I could never have seen that. Interesting. Thank you, Gabriel.
re: Re: Shadows
I thought over any hesitation; if there was to be any. I lead him to the parlor where the candle wax burned of blackcurrant and bare bones – I started running with the story. He just started running. :)
re: re: Re: Shadows
27th Nov 2014 00:42am
I don't mean to butt in here, but that last reply was a worthwhile poem in itself.. Just thought I'd say.
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Re: Shadows
26th Nov 2014 10:54pm
I sometimes see things move
in the shadows that shouldn't,
although perhaps it is the thing
that casts the shadow that moves,
I don't know...
in the shadows that shouldn't,
although perhaps it is the thing
that casts the shadow that moves,
I don't know...
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Re: Shadows
27th Nov 2014 00:38am
Darkness is not only valid around here, it's dominant. Just trying to keep it at bay. Good read, Pishashee. You've been doing wonders with minimal words.
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Re: Shadows
Anonymous
27th Nov 2014 2:27am
Why do I feel like these few lines can actually turn into a mysterious journey, are you teasing us Pish with that comma at the end? lol
Actually, one might think that dark/darkness is still and non penetrable but the truth is, even the slightest light/thought can bring wonders and change the whole theory of absolute.
Thought provoking piece..for sure :)
Actually, one might think that dark/darkness is still and non penetrable but the truth is, even the slightest light/thought can bring wonders and change the whole theory of absolute.
Thought provoking piece..for sure :)
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Re: Shadows
27th Nov 2014 1:11pm
shadows are just slightly darkened lights, right?
eye could be wrong.....
brilliant weebitty writ wrought here,dear....
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