Justice - Senryu

Oh if I only had the time to say the ways; you're brilliant, Miss Chi. I love this one.

Your words mean a lot to me, dear Pish. Glad that you like this senryu. I tried to put what came first to my mind about "Justice" into 17 syllables. Wasn't too difficult ... Thanks for the read and the comment!

Hhhhmmmm not sure
bout it bein his plaything
sounds more like what man
would use it like to me, God
would likely exact it swiftly
n deservedly... Definitely a
provoking spill you have here
my dear Chi...

Maybe provoking, Poe. But sometimes the concept "justice" is just like that to me. Someone's plaything. Perhaps rather the devil's?

justice, or fair play, call it
what you will, a square deal,
perhaps, I don't know if it's
real, but then I don't know
if anything is...

sorry, rambling around your very
thoughtful piece..:)

Oh, of all people, Paul, you'd be the last to ramble. I appreciate your thoughts very much, you know that. What is meant by 'justice' sometimes just isn't right ...

Thoughtful piece. Very intriguing. Well done :)

As I have not much good to say about so-called justice I tried to pack that into 17 syllables. That's more than enough, I guess.

There's a joke (observation) that goes ...

When you look at who's in jail you see "just us" - the poor - uneducated - underrepresented - and the forgotten ...

Righteous pen.

That's a good one, Lobo. And so true!

Thank you for your valuable comment, as always!