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Lazy Sunday
It's raining like crazy
You can't see in front of you
I decide to stay in
Spend some lazy time alone
Flipping through the channels
There was absolutely nothing on
Decided to watch a movie
I popped in an old favirite "9 1/2 Weeks"
It was my introduction to erotica
I first saw it as a young teen
Being an untouched girl
I was in complete shock
I have found through the years
This 80's movie has influenced me greatly
I crave the blindfolds and the ice cubes
The control and the dominance
I become lost within my own head
Daydreaming of the two of us
Taking their place
Things very soon got out of hand
Off came my lil shorts
Then my thin tshirt
I wasn't wearing a bra or undies
So that was easy access
My hand became yours
You know just what to do
Soon I was screaming your name
At the top of my lungs
A smile on my face
Fingers left sticky and wet
Longing for your lips
To finish me off with a kiss
You can't see in front of you
I decide to stay in
Spend some lazy time alone
Flipping through the channels
There was absolutely nothing on
Decided to watch a movie
I popped in an old favirite "9 1/2 Weeks"
It was my introduction to erotica
I first saw it as a young teen
Being an untouched girl
I was in complete shock
I have found through the years
This 80's movie has influenced me greatly
I crave the blindfolds and the ice cubes
The control and the dominance
I become lost within my own head
Daydreaming of the two of us
Taking their place
Things very soon got out of hand
Off came my lil shorts
Then my thin tshirt
I wasn't wearing a bra or undies
So that was easy access
My hand became yours
You know just what to do
Soon I was screaming your name
At the top of my lungs
A smile on my face
Fingers left sticky and wet
Longing for your lips
To finish me off with a kiss
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Re: Lazy Sunday
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24th Nov 2014 8:29pm
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25th Nov 2014 4:54pm
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24th Nov 2014 8:40pm
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25th Nov 2014 4:56pm
Oh Sad u must darlin
Im sure u will love it
Glad u liked my lil write
Im sure u will love it
Glad u liked my lil write
Re: Lazy Sunday
24th Nov 2014 10:07pm
Oh hell yea THAT was an intense movie
of erotic desires lol mmmmmm loved the imagery in this n the words...:)
of erotic desires lol mmmmmm loved the imagery in this n the words...:)
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re: Re: Lazy Sunday
25th Nov 2014 4:58pm
It definitely was PM
That movie shaped my young lil mind
From better or worse lol
Glad u liked it hun
That movie shaped my young lil mind
From better or worse lol
Glad u liked it hun
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24th Nov 2014 10:22pm
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25th Nov 2014 5:11pm
Re: Lazy Sunday
24th Nov 2014 10:59pm
Sounds good to me. A lazy afternoon down south, rain or no rain, a few mint juleps, then see what transpires. Even if it's for 9 1/2 weeks. Another fine one, Belle. Thank you.
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25th Nov 2014 5:13pm
It was the perfect way Crow to cure my rainy day blues
Ty u so much darlin
Ty u so much darlin
Re: Lazy Sunday
24th Nov 2014 11:39pm
Very good bit of erotica you've penned here, Belle! Some movies and books can have quite the profound effect on someone both whilst they are growing up and ever afterwards too... though sometimes the impact changes somewhat as time goes on. I still have some fond memories of past fantasies of my own, though I hesitate to use the word "past" since my fantasies are still very, very strong with me. *Giggle* Though of course mine are a little different than the sort portrayed in your poem here, me being a lesbian. Tee-hee-hee! But one thing that isn't all that different - passion's heat within a person's heart. ;)
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25th Nov 2014 5:18pm
Needs r needs dear Jessica
Whether its the touch of a man or a woman u long for
Love n intimacy r universal
Too many people forget that
Glad u liked it sweety
Whether its the touch of a man or a woman u long for
Love n intimacy r universal
Too many people forget that
Glad u liked it sweety
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25th Nov 2014 10:06pm
So true, Belle! You're not just talented but sometimes very wise and smart too. :)
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Re: Lazy Sunday
Anonymous
25th Nov 2014 3:59am
Belle,
You've got it very warm here on a cold night. Glad to see someone who knows what lazy Sundays were meant for. Gotta live that easy access :-)
tornado
You've got it very warm here on a cold night. Glad to see someone who knows what lazy Sundays were meant for. Gotta live that easy access :-)
tornado
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re: Re: Lazy Sunday
25th Nov 2014 5:23pm
Hmmmm...well Mr Tornado
Glad to know ive warmed things up down ur way darlin
Nothin like a rainy day to get good n comfy n have some playtime. Whether alone or with the right company
Glad to know ive warmed things up down ur way darlin
Nothin like a rainy day to get good n comfy n have some playtime. Whether alone or with the right company
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25th Nov 2014 6:04am
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25th Nov 2014 5:39pm
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25th Nov 2014 8:07am
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25th Nov 2014 5:43pm
Who is to say i didnt start on Fri night Mr Feddeler
N Sunday afternoon was the CLIMAX sir
Awesome flick darlin
N Sunday afternoon was the CLIMAX sir
Awesome flick darlin
Re: Lazy Sunday
3rd Dec 2014 5:02pm