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Passionate Puzzle
The two of us fit so perfectly
Like two missing pieces
Lost so long ago
Misplaced by our past loves
Our minds connect
In perfect sync together
Sensual thoughts openly shared
Neither of us allowing fear to rule
Our lips mold into one
Sweet tastes shared
Mixed to perfection
A cocktail to begin our night
Bodies who read one another
When they connect
Friction throws off sparks
Tight heat ignites
Like two missing pieces
Lost so long ago
Misplaced by our past loves
Our minds connect
In perfect sync together
Sensual thoughts openly shared
Neither of us allowing fear to rule
Our lips mold into one
Sweet tastes shared
Mixed to perfection
A cocktail to begin our night
Bodies who read one another
When they connect
Friction throws off sparks
Tight heat ignites
Published 23rd Nov 2014
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23rd Nov 2014 8:23pm
Favourite verses first and last. Romantic imagination warms to the second half of the first verse implying 'we barked up the wrong trees with others'.
25th Nov 2014 7:15pm
Glad u liked SS
Havent we all made the wrong choices of lovers n our pasts
Its universal....so very few get it right the first time
Havent we all made the wrong choices of lovers n our pasts
Its universal....so very few get it right the first time
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23rd Nov 2014 8:36pm
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25th Nov 2014 7:18pm
Gabriel ill b sure n check it out darlin
Glad u enjoyed my lil write darlin
Glad u enjoyed my lil write darlin
23rd Nov 2014 11:00pm
25th Nov 2014 7:19pm
23rd Nov 2014 11:47pm
"Sensual thoughts openly shared/Neither of us allowing fear to rule." Beautifully said, Belle. I couldn't agree more.
25th Nov 2014 7:21pm
Fear rules too many of our decisions
Sometimes n life u just have to go for it
Sometimes n life u just have to go for it
24th Nov 2014 1:24am
Two parts of a whole. Now joined and complete. A pairing made to be. Nice write Belle.
25th Nov 2014 7:27pm
Sometimes it does take another to complete us
So few hold out tho for that person to come into their life
Thanx so much dear friend
So few hold out tho for that person to come into their life
Thanx so much dear friend
24th Nov 2014 1:39am
The past blades that carved a bloody path that left us to crawl away
Defined the hidden corners of the dark pieces that fit perfect today
Defined the hidden corners of the dark pieces that fit perfect today
25th Nov 2014 7:30pm
The scars left behind
Await the perfect one
The one that will take the time
To kiss them away
Thanx for the read my dear AS
Await the perfect one
The one that will take the time
To kiss them away
Thanx for the read my dear AS
24th Nov 2014 1:56am
synchronous in mind as well as body. revealing hidden secrets to each other, in trust, that's especially sexy, Belle...
25th Nov 2014 7:33pm
Trust is the operative word
Without true passion can never b reached
Thanx so much Mr Feddeler
Without true passion can never b reached
Thanx so much Mr Feddeler
24th Nov 2014 4:33am
To share that deep of a connection is a truly beautiful thing...wonderful piece LSB
25th Nov 2014 7:34pm
So very true GW
A connection that deep shouldnt b let go of
Glad u liked it darlin
A connection that deep shouldnt b let go of
Glad u liked it darlin
24th Nov 2014 3:11pm
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