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small Dreams
I am having small dreams
A hot steaming bubble bath with candles
A hot steaming cup of tea, with extra sugar
A hot steaming sauna naked with no towels
A hot steaming Madras with Coconut rice
A hot steaming shower with lavender gel
A hot steaming bowl of soup with croutons
A hot steaming hot chocolate with marshmallows
A hot steaming Turkish bath with massage
A hot steaming Latte in front of the fire
A hot steamy affair on the rug in front of the fire
I am having small dreams
Because I can’t afford big ones
A hot steaming bubble bath with candles
A hot steaming cup of tea, with extra sugar
A hot steaming sauna naked with no towels
A hot steaming Madras with Coconut rice
A hot steaming shower with lavender gel
A hot steaming bowl of soup with croutons
A hot steaming hot chocolate with marshmallows
A hot steaming Turkish bath with massage
A hot steaming Latte in front of the fire
A hot steamy affair on the rug in front of the fire
I am having small dreams
Because I can’t afford big ones
Published 19th Nov 2014
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19th Nov 2014 9:19pm
nothing wrong with these dreams David....
each one is very enjoyable....
remember its the little things that join up to make the big things... :)
each one is very enjoyable....
remember its the little things that join up to make the big things... :)
19th Nov 2014 9:29pm
19th Nov 2014 10:01pm
Boy did this poem get me riled. Hot steaming this; hot steaming that, and what have I been doing the last two !#@&n days, tracings steam pipes, and fixing steam radiators.
I can't even get away from the steam when I try to relax by reading a few DU poems. But no luck. Dave had to throw down a steam poem.
Dave's poem has made me Steaming Mad, even though its a brilliant piece of work.
"In a cold world, whether from a tea kettle an old radiator, nothing can be more comforting than the soft whisper of steams hiss."
I can't even get away from the steam when I try to relax by reading a few DU poems. But no luck. Dave had to throw down a steam poem.
Dave's poem has made me Steaming Mad, even though its a brilliant piece of work.
"In a cold world, whether from a tea kettle an old radiator, nothing can be more comforting than the soft whisper of steams hiss."
20th Nov 2014 00:51am
when I wrote it I was just letting of steam. I had to move under my own steam to get up a full head of steam. Then I steamed right in, blew off some steam, wrote the steamy poem then ran out of steam,.........
:-)
:-)
