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Sympathy
My heart is splintered
Have never known this much pain
Losing my mother
Sorrow washing over me
A salty sea of tears
I loved with all my heart
Memories will provide solace
But
The road will be empty
Till I can see light again
I won't rush my grieving
Nature needs to play it's course
I'll be alright one day again
But for now the silence is deafening
I was loved so much
Gave it back in spades
Farewell my lovely
Walk in peace on the other side
Goodbye ...
Have never known this much pain
Losing my mother
Sorrow washing over me
A salty sea of tears
I loved with all my heart
Memories will provide solace
But
The road will be empty
Till I can see light again
I won't rush my grieving
Nature needs to play it's course
I'll be alright one day again
But for now the silence is deafening
I was loved so much
Gave it back in spades
Farewell my lovely
Walk in peace on the other side
Goodbye ...
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Re: Sympathy
18th Nov 2014 4:47am
Oh my Mr. PoetSpeak my heart goes out to you during this difficult time. Your mom sounds like a woman of so much goodness and I know your memories will be beautiful.
My deepest condolences....sending you hugs and prayers.
My deepest condolences....sending you hugs and prayers.
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18th Nov 2014 10:38am
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18th Nov 2014 5:14am
the woman who shaped you is a great one indeed ... You're in my thoughts and heart brotha
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18th Nov 2014 10:40am
Thank you Lo
The pain is terrible but the memories are sweet
I appreciate you, always ...
The pain is terrible but the memories are sweet
I appreciate you, always ...
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Anonymous
18th Nov 2014 11:17am
Sorry for your loss brotha...

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18th Nov 2014 11:19am
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18th Nov 2014 4:06pm
Sir Poet I'm so sorry for your loss.. may memories of you beloved Mother keep you.. poignant tender write with love and respect Brenda
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18th Nov 2014 6:52pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 19th Nov 2014 2:51am
19th Nov 2014 2:50am
Sweet Speak.....Sorry to hear of such pain.....beautiful tribute to your Mom.....I'm sure she is looking down on your smiling.....sending luv hugs and prayers your way....xo :)

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19th Nov 2014 4:23am
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19th Nov 2014 1:32pm
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19th Nov 2014 9:23pm
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20th Nov 2014 1:09am
tears filled my eyes as I read this....so sorry...and you are right ,grieving is awful, but not to be rushed. Sending a hug
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20th Nov 2014 1:31am