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For Raven (для ворон) (Tuesday, October 7, 2003)
i gaze passionately into your eyes,
loosing my soul in them...
reach out my hand, then draw it back
i have not yet the chance
at paradise
trapped between our linked souls
(Я смотрю страстно в глаза,
потери моей души в них ...
протягиваю руку, потом нарисовать его обратно
Я еще не шанс
в раю
в ловушке между нашими душами связаны)
loosing my soul in them...
reach out my hand, then draw it back
i have not yet the chance
at paradise
trapped between our linked souls
(Я смотрю страстно в глаза,
потери моей души в них ...
протягиваю руку, потом нарисовать его обратно
Я еще не шанс
в раю
в ловушке между нашими душами связаны)
Published 14th Nov 2014
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14th Nov 2014 8:04pm
Unfortunately, there's no Russian character set on my computer. So, I have to transliterate:
Ochen' khorosho!
You've captured much of Russian poetry's soul in your poem. Well done! :-)
Ochen' khorosho!
You've captured much of Russian poetry's soul in your poem. Well done! :-)
14th Nov 2014 9:52pm
