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She creeps
Into the night she creeps
Preying on the weak
keeping their mind a fog
making everyone believe she's an innocent
A kind a Good old soul
But no
This bitch is crazy
Speaking to the dead
Wishing those voices out of her head
If only to be like you , her or even he
I doubt it though
That crazy bitch lays dorment inside us all
Just take your time and search and see..
It ain't just me
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24th Apr 2011 5:51am
Interesting...
Anonymous
24th Apr 2011 5:55am
This line perplexed me...
Maybe I'd be like you her or he
Confusing but clever, part of the overall charm of this sweet poem. I like it! I love short and sweet poems...
Maybe I'd be like you her or he
Confusing but clever, part of the overall charm of this sweet poem. I like it! I love short and sweet poems...

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Oh yeah
Anonymous
24th Apr 2011 6:11am
This a great one Gg! To be continued? Please...pretty please. :)

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Lol
24th Apr 2011 6:35am
Yes to be continued of course and to crim thanks sweetie :) and maik I like putting the him her or she or the other way around idk why it's kinda my thing I have it in a few poems I'm odd yes lol thank you
I <3 krazi bishes :D
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24th Apr 2011 2:37pm
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25th Apr 2011 9:19am
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25th Apr 2011 12:47pm
hahaha
24th Apr 2011 7:19pm
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