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Naked for a Night
trembles shaking
the shadowy foundation
walls built with scar tissue
inbedded deep rebar
of betrayal
feel them fall away
as my restraints take hold
fading memories drip away
as pages of history unfold
awaken with naked emotions
stripped layers laid to rest
slipping back into dreams
once had
for the night
As my guest
the shadowy foundation
walls built with scar tissue
inbedded deep rebar
of betrayal
feel them fall away
as my restraints take hold
fading memories drip away
as pages of history unfold
awaken with naked emotions
stripped layers laid to rest
slipping back into dreams
once had
for the night
As my guest
Published 13th Nov 2014
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13th Nov 2014 2:02am
Not what I expecting when I came to this, but wow
it sure felt gripping in content bro! Very nicely
penned even with the heavy theme...
it sure felt gripping in content bro! Very nicely
penned even with the heavy theme...
13th Nov 2014 2:19am
I believe many will feel the same about the title, it is deeper than its cheap sediment. Thank you sir for visiting
13th Nov 2014 2:26am
that's a deep & dark piece of writing; foreboding atmosphere, in the nature of Poe...
15th Nov 2014 5:25pm
To have you commenting is a bit unreal, adding Poe is surreal, tho I get what you are saying it ripples beyond the pond I play in.
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13th Nov 2014 8:47am
i should have known better than to expect a cheap thrill from you when reading the title.... love the image of "stripped layers laid to rest".
a beautifully sensual piece, Sir
a beautifully sensual piece, Sir
16th Nov 2014 6:34pm
I have cheap thrills quilled about and to be honest this one was started out that way, I was feeling deeper than that and this is what transpired. Thank you always hun.
Bare emotions tingle
As they r dtripped to their core
Personal reflection upon ur command
Naked only to u
For a fleeting moment in time
Love this piece AS. This type of baring of ones self is harder than the simple act of nudity whether u r a woman or a man
As they r dtripped to their core
Personal reflection upon ur command
Naked only to u
For a fleeting moment in time
Love this piece AS. This type of baring of ones self is harder than the simple act of nudity whether u r a woman or a man
16th Nov 2014 6:37pm
Little Southern Belle,
If we would all strip for our desires to people that understand the gift of exposure, the world would be a better place. Thank you
If we would all strip for our desires to people that understand the gift of exposure, the world would be a better place. Thank you
13th Nov 2014 3:04pm
Sweet Soul.......what alluring invitation......no woman I'm sure could resist your restraints of freedom.....Luv this. Xo :)
16th Nov 2014 6:41pm
Nor can one resist the soft embrace of a loving embrace of an angel dressed in the garden of flowers that gently kiss us deep within. Thank you love
13th Nov 2014 8:48pm
Extremely dark of this erotic piece of art. I felt welcome as a guest for this poem. Great work!
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16th Nov 2014 6:46pm
You found the area of the poem I myself find most pleasing. Always happy when I see you visiting.
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18th Nov 2014 8:12pm
This is a fascinating poem. I'm shaken by its confounding internal structure through simplicity. It has a menacing effect. Darkly put. Love it, :)
21st Nov 2014 3:10pm
Blue Angel
Thank you for your deep comments. It stirs me wickedly when my lips trace the words that embrace me.
Thank you for your deep comments. It stirs me wickedly when my lips trace the words that embrace me.
