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Thoughts

Tears...

Pain...

Fear...

Screams...

Hurt...

Blood...

Cuts...

Rage...

Death...

Suicide...

Anger...

Contained...

About to be let free...

So scared...

Catastrophic...

Help...

No help...

Not possible...

Need someone...

Cant control it...

Friends...

Gone...

Family...

Gone...

Killing me...

Slow...

Help...

Pain...

Needs released...

Good-bye...

Written by night-star

(Rhiannon)

Published 11th Nov 2014

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Re: Thoughts

Anonymous

11th Nov 2014 9:29pm

Perfect!

Re: Thoughts

Druzela_Pretoria13 (B T Irving)

12th Nov 2014 12:47pm

I have truly felt these words before maybe not in that specific order but felt them surely. I like how it's not in a traditional poetry writ and still has the feeling and passion. Shows that you don't have to conform to be real. This is real.