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Velvet Shadows
There you are once again
Filling my erotic dreams
Hovering above my sleeping body
Your wanting eyes looking down
Scanning over each and every inch
Your eyes telling me
That I meet your approval
In my lil blue sexy yet innocent nightie
Shadowy fingers pass over my body
Like velvet spiders crawling down
Seeking out their pink silky web
Pleasure awaiting them there
It's useless to fight it
These overpowering urges within
My trembling body and sparkling emeralds tell on me
Giving my inner most passions away
Desperately needing to tsste my dream lover
I sit up reaching out to your shadow
Pulling you to me
Feasting upon your throbbing rod
Feeling your hips moving
Your primal cies filling the ebony night
My name released gliding on the clouds
As your dream is answered by me
Filling my erotic dreams
Hovering above my sleeping body
Your wanting eyes looking down
Scanning over each and every inch
Your eyes telling me
That I meet your approval
In my lil blue sexy yet innocent nightie
Shadowy fingers pass over my body
Like velvet spiders crawling down
Seeking out their pink silky web
Pleasure awaiting them there
It's useless to fight it
These overpowering urges within
My trembling body and sparkling emeralds tell on me
Giving my inner most passions away
Desperately needing to tsste my dream lover
I sit up reaching out to your shadow
Pulling you to me
Feasting upon your throbbing rod
Feeling your hips moving
Your primal cies filling the ebony night
My name released gliding on the clouds
As your dream is answered by me
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Re: Velvet Shadows
10th Nov 2014 9:05pm
LSB, this is a perfectly described cyber-romance. Your writing drips with eroticism...a sweet nectar indeed. "My name released gliding on a cloud" is one of my favorite passages.
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re: Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 3:58pm
This piece comes straight from true inspiration. So glad u liked it so much darlin
Re: Velvet Shadows
Anonymous
10th Nov 2014 9:30pm
Belle,
sexy, yet so innocent, dreams from the velvet underground. Loved your stanza:
"t's useless to fight it
These overpowering urges within
My trembling body and sparkling emeralds tell on me
Giving my inner most passions away"
A very good night!
tornado
sexy, yet so innocent, dreams from the velvet underground. Loved your stanza:
"t's useless to fight it
These overpowering urges within
My trembling body and sparkling emeralds tell on me
Giving my inner most passions away"
A very good night!
tornado
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re: Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 4:00pm
Reliving a very passionate encounter thru my words. Im touched that u enjoyed it so much hun
Re: Velvet Shadows
10th Nov 2014 11:31pm
it's a very sensual fantasy, Belle, quite an erotic interlude for lovers in their velvet dream...
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re: Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 4:03pm
Mr Feddeler my dreams r an amazingly erotic place...
N who can refuse the touch of soft velvet on bare skin?
Glad u liked it darlin
N who can refuse the touch of soft velvet on bare skin?
Glad u liked it darlin
Re: Velvet Shadows
10th Nov 2014 11:46pm
This is wonderful. You're blend of lyricism and eroticism is almost perfectly balanced, and your "little blue sexy but innocent nightie" keeps its beauty from taking itself too seriously. And those last two lines: "My name released gliding on the clouds/As your dream is answered by me." Wow!
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re: Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 4:13pm
Re: Velvet Shadows
11th Nov 2014 00:36am
Swallow the shadows
As you awaken in my dreams
Tethered to desires
That only you
Dare to dream
As you awaken in my dreams
Tethered to desires
That only you
Dare to dream
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re: Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 4:17pm
Oh AS dream i do
Longing for his strong velvet touch
To tuck me in
Each n every night
Glad u enjoyed it hun
Longing for his strong velvet touch
To tuck me in
Each n every night
Glad u enjoyed it hun
Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 11:41am
re: Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 4:18pm
Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 4:46pm
Truly, The stuff of...
Very wet dreams! lol
Loving this magical lil take my dear :)
Very wet dreams! lol
Loving this magical lil take my dear :)
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re: Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 5:08pm
As for how wet my dream was thats between my fingers n me lmao
Glad u liked my take
Glad u liked my take
Re: Velvet Shadows
12th Nov 2014 11:40pm
It's erotic and hot but more so it speaks of possession and how he has possessed your heart and you have possessed his. Very nice Belle.
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