Power

so beautiful xmar...
tis what love is about....
brings a smile to my face.... :)

Yes you put your heart in someone elses hands. Trusting them to treat it with loving tenderness. Than you Kate much appreciated.

Beautiful♥ beautiful♥

Thank you Lori. You're always welcome here.

great Xmar - to give is to let go

Yes let go and trust. Thanks for reading Whale. Nice to hear from you again.

It's good to see a crafted poem with a structure. So, if I may be allowed a modicum of constructive criticism. I love the first line, I have no power over this, it is simple, but scans beautifully and powerfully (pun not intended). It sets the scansion for the poem. But you let the scansion halt in places. Take the line 'Kiss me gently upon the lips'. It has an extra beat. I, personally can see no poetic effect to be gained from it. Consider 'Kiss me gently on the lips' I believe it reads better. I presume the last two lines were a deliberate departure from the rhythm for dramatic effect. I felt that it didn't work as well as it might. A little too mundane. It ends with a slightly bathetic feel. Hope you don't mind my input. Just some thoughts. Overall I liked the poem.  

I don't mind. I appreciate the input. Thank you.

Oh my dear friend what beauty u have given us with this one. U have such a loving soul. I have no doubt that the one u love is awaiting u with open arms

Open arms, open heart what more would I want. Thank you Belle.

This is fabulous. Made me smile when I needed one. :)

I am glad I could brighten your day just a little.

Love,the power,and the glory...

I appreciate your words  Mourganna thank you.

Oh X.....this is such a beautiful write......nothing more trusting than giving your all. Enjoyed! Xo :)

Thank you flower girl. I appreciate your comments.

Awww Xmar, this melted my heart....I love when a man shows his love and I love the title!

Touching ;)

It's a give and take kind of thing. Thanks for dropping in Lena.

Hmmmm
absolute power of write

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I am glad you enjoyed it sektioN8ty. Stop in any time.

Hmmmm
absolute power of write

BrrrRrrrrHhhh

That was beautifully written

I am glad you enjoyed it. Stop in any time.

I'd be happy to any time

Beautiful as always, you have something I adore such a pleasure to read
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Great expression here me likes :)
Zazzles

Thank you Jackie. Nice to see you around here again.

Your writing makes my heart skip a beat. Great job!

I am happy you enjoyed it. Stop in any time.