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The Last Time I Saw You
The last time I saw you
Your hair had grown longer
Smile had shrunk smaller
and your eyes dark
The last time I saw you
It was only your face
no public display
a night outside the bedroom
The last time I saw you
I could taste the absence
the end was coming near
and now it's finally here
Your hair had grown longer
Smile had shrunk smaller
and your eyes dark
The last time I saw you
It was only your face
no public display
a night outside the bedroom
The last time I saw you
I could taste the absence
the end was coming near
and now it's finally here
Published 6th Nov 2014
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2014 4:25pm
This is really good.. I love the flow, and wordplay.. Beautifully written..
Dave
Dave
