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let me bleed
EVRY CUTTING SCAR ON THIS BODY OF MINE IS A SCAR OF HURT IVE FELT FOR THE LAST SEVERAL YEARS
SURE PPLE CALL ME CUTTER OR CHASE ME DOWN THE HALL WITH A RAZOR TELL ME TO "CUT YOURSELF"
ALL I KNOW IS THAT THERE NOT ME AND THEY DONT KNOW WHAT IM GOING THROUGH
PPLE SAY THAT THE MUSIC I LISTEN TO IS SCARY AND DEPRESSING.....WELL NO SHIT SHERLOCK WATCHU EXCPECTING BLACK-EYED-PEAS?!(EWWWASHELL)
I DONT KNOW ALOT OF PPLE WHO HAVE THE SAME PROBLEMS AS ME AND USE A RAZOR WHEN THERE DEPRESSED BUT ITZ MY HOBBY PRTTY MUCH
WHEN I USE THAT RAZOR ON MYSELF I FEEL LIKE THERES NO ONE ELSE IN THIS WORLD WHO CAN TELL ME I DONT BELONG
EVRYNIGHT I WAIT TO DIE IN MY SLEEP BUT I WAKE UP IN SHAME.AND THE SHAME I FEEL IS LIKE NO OTHER
SO ONE OF THESE DAYS WHEN I DAY AND GO TO HELL ILL BE PROUD AND SATANS ANGEL FOREVR AND ALWAYS..........
SURE PPLE CALL ME CUTTER OR CHASE ME DOWN THE HALL WITH A RAZOR TELL ME TO "CUT YOURSELF"
ALL I KNOW IS THAT THERE NOT ME AND THEY DONT KNOW WHAT IM GOING THROUGH
PPLE SAY THAT THE MUSIC I LISTEN TO IS SCARY AND DEPRESSING.....WELL NO SHIT SHERLOCK WATCHU EXCPECTING BLACK-EYED-PEAS?!(EWWWASHELL)
I DONT KNOW ALOT OF PPLE WHO HAVE THE SAME PROBLEMS AS ME AND USE A RAZOR WHEN THERE DEPRESSED BUT ITZ MY HOBBY PRTTY MUCH
WHEN I USE THAT RAZOR ON MYSELF I FEEL LIKE THERES NO ONE ELSE IN THIS WORLD WHO CAN TELL ME I DONT BELONG
EVRYNIGHT I WAIT TO DIE IN MY SLEEP BUT I WAKE UP IN SHAME.AND THE SHAME I FEEL IS LIKE NO OTHER
SO ONE OF THESE DAYS WHEN I DAY AND GO TO HELL ILL BE PROUD AND SATANS ANGEL FOREVR AND ALWAYS..........
Published 21st Apr 2011
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21st Apr 2011 3:01am
Please write rather than text, and don't shout, and look a little closer at your work (last line has a glaring error in it).
Not much to get excited about here.
Not much to get excited about here.
21st Apr 2011 1:57pm
Dude, or Dudette, she just started. Cut her some slack? Or atleast say something GOOD about the poem. And trust me, there were alot of good things about it. She's a great new writer. I used to use text talk when I was younger, but now I try to use correct punctuation and all of that cool stuff. Thanks.
-Michelle
-Michelle
27th Apr 2011 10:45pm
youre right there is nothing exciting about this.....but you act like im all jolly like holly becuase i wrote something that explains me like no other.
21st Apr 2011 3:45am
I like this because it reminds me of how I use to feel when I use to be a cutter too. Which is why I completely understand why you wrote this the way it's posted. It's all that rage and turmoil feeling pent up inside! Reason I use to cut myself too. I don't like being reminded of all that, but it helps to remember at times.
Anonymous
21st Apr 2011 6:59am
I made that rookie mistake when I first started posting here "laughs" more people will read this if you change it from all caps. If you don't believe me go and read a few of mine starting on page 1. Just friendly advice...Or if it was your intent to make it like this...than my bad good job! ;)
21st Apr 2011 1:54pm
You've already 3 comments not counting this one. This is really good and I'm glad I showed you this website. It really helps get feelings out. Well anyways, I'm putting on my makeup about to get to school. See ya there! XD
23rd Apr 2011 1:39am
hey i personally love the poem. its simple, yet straight to the point and shows the emotion. i can relate to the depression and rage. as long as your poem comes from inside it doesn't matter how it's written. a poet will see past that. great work. keep it up.
