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Hey Dead Girl
Went shopping alone today
super fucking boring
then I heard someone call your name
super fucking strange
I totally had to pause
who wouldn't,
then I had to shake it off,
you shot yourself in the head
you killed everything
you're fucking dead....
super fucking boring
then I heard someone call your name
super fucking strange
I totally had to pause
who wouldn't,
then I had to shake it off,
you shot yourself in the head
you killed everything
you're fucking dead....
Published 27th Oct 2014
| Edited 28th Oct 2014
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27th Oct 2014 4:52pm
ghosties like t'do that shit...(well, why not? yknow?)
I'd put this in Upbeat Poems,
butthat's just, uhhhhh, 'me'
not a groundbreaking piece'o literature, but it
Britenned My Day, kinda
write-on Nik ! Love ye!
27th Oct 2014 5:01pm
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27th Oct 2014 8:43pm
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28th Oct 2014 12:35pm
Fucking cool... no one says fuck and gives it fucking meaning like you. Nice snappy ending too.
28th Oct 2014 12:46pm
31st Oct 2014 3:26am
Good power burst!
Hits in the solar plexus. Good metaphysical ride, Nikki!
Hits in the solar plexus. Good metaphysical ride, Nikki!
