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One In The Chamber
Theres a bullet in the chamber of my heart
Ricochetting agaist its newly fleshy insides
Causing me to bleed out my feelings
Best kept hidden
I hate being human at times
So many emotions
I can't control
Drugs for so long had made a wall of steel
I was at home in my isolation
A bullet in the chamber of my heart
Piercing my soul
Overly sensitive now
My barriers down
I hate feelings I wish I could kill them
Bury them in an inpenetrable grave
Never to be dug up again
Bleeding my feelings like an emotional slave
A captive to new found emotions
Wave after wave
Theres a bullet in my heart
One in the chamber
Tearing me apart.
Ricochetting agaist its newly fleshy insides
Causing me to bleed out my feelings
Best kept hidden
I hate being human at times
So many emotions
I can't control
Drugs for so long had made a wall of steel
I was at home in my isolation
A bullet in the chamber of my heart
Piercing my soul
Overly sensitive now
My barriers down
I hate feelings I wish I could kill them
Bury them in an inpenetrable grave
Never to be dug up again
Bleeding my feelings like an emotional slave
A captive to new found emotions
Wave after wave
Theres a bullet in my heart
One in the chamber
Tearing me apart.
Published 20th Apr 2011
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Anonymous
20th Apr 2011 5:07am
Another great piece! You keep 'em pumping out don't you? There is always an edge of a sad loneliness to your poetry. Its very unique...but hard to explain all the same. 5/5 stars! Great stylization and form!
20th Apr 2011 5:19am
Thank you Maikeru you inspire me to keep writing your comments made my evening..peace Crim :)
Anonymous
20th Apr 2011 6:12am
You write so well! Every day, something new and great.
20th Apr 2011 6:19am
Thank you Shaman emotions are a new thing for me it hurts at times and i'm not used to it..without my drug wall..thank you also for the lovely comment..peace Brenda
20th Apr 2011 6:36am
Cool poem! Part of being human with emotions is that the heart is very much like a loaded weapon. Once the emotions are triggered the heart rapidly fires away without care for the pain it causes. This is a great write.
20th Apr 2011 6:55am
Yes I must learn to deal with these new emotions..ty for the insightful and thoughtful comment..peace Brenda
