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Hotel
Red dress
Spotlight
Hair black
Skin white
Cold keys
Touch light
Red hair
Fire light
Black tie
Shirt white
New news
Uptight
Red chair
Hot light
Bookshelf
Upright
Window
Shut tight
Red door
Cool night
Rainbow
Streetlight
Gold dust
Too bright
Note: Inspired by Edward Hopper's 1932 painting 'Room in New York'.
Spotlight
Hair black
Skin white
Cold keys
Touch light
Red hair
Fire light
Black tie
Shirt white
New news
Uptight
Red chair
Hot light
Bookshelf
Upright
Window
Shut tight
Red door
Cool night
Rainbow
Streetlight
Gold dust
Too bright
Note: Inspired by Edward Hopper's 1932 painting 'Room in New York'.
Published 23rd Oct 2014
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23rd Oct 2014 2:59pm
25th Nov 2014 2:58pm
23rd Oct 2014 5:05pm
Love that, Spanker. Style and content. Feels absolutely hotelly and reads like illuminated advertising blink-blink ... blink-blink ... :-).
25th Nov 2014 3:00pm
23rd Oct 2014 11:01pm
25th Nov 2014 3:03pm
THX PS - I REALLY VALUE ALL THE GREAT FEEDBACK I GET FROM DUP (TOUGH DISCERNING AUDIENCE).
