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Bare Naked Ladies
October’s trees wear lovely things,
each year the ladies undress,
slinging their clothes off,
never accountable for where they fall,
flushed to the hungry wind of their song.
each year the ladies undress,
slinging their clothes off,
never accountable for where they fall,
flushed to the hungry wind of their song.
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Re: Bare Naked Ladies
21st Oct 2014 1:08am
loose and crumpled they
lie on the (forest) floor...
and some have hung around
since the year before...
( I really like this poem,
by the way..:)
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re: Re: Bare Naked Ladies
That's beautiful, and thank you.
Captured sunshine
of the ages,
fall as embers
from Milady's dress,
in hues of auburn masquerade,
and saffron gems of happiness.
Captured sunshine
of the ages,
fall as embers
from Milady's dress,
in hues of auburn masquerade,
and saffron gems of happiness.
Re: Bare Naked Ladies
21st Oct 2014 1:12am
it's an apt portrait, beautiful, & mournful. such is the irreverant hand of the season...
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21st Oct 2014 10:23am
Re: Bare Naked Ladies
21st Oct 2014 7:48pm
Only the fig trees will keep a single leaf.
An adorable autumn poem. And sexy, too :-).
An adorable autumn poem. And sexy, too :-).
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re: Re: Bare Naked Ladies
21st Oct 2014 11:21pm
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21st Oct 2014 11:01pm
re: Re: Bare Naked Ladies
21st Oct 2014 11:18pm
Maybe the old man will go easy this year, I heard the persimmons are being agreeable. Who knows. There's always the Fir Tree. I have such a beauty in my back yard - They're really pretty. Thank you xmar.. :)
Re: Bare Naked Ladies
22nd Oct 2014 00:17am
wish I knowed some naked ladies.....well, maybe 'any' naked ladies.....
apparently my nakedness no longer deems me desirable to
'desireAble' naked ladies....
(I've no idear what I'm babbling a'bout)
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re: Re: Bare Naked Ladies
22nd Oct 2014 3:35am
(I've no idear what I'm babbling a'bout).. I bet you say that to all the naked ladies. ;)
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22nd Oct 2014 7:17pm
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23rd Oct 2014 1:07am
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23rd Oct 2014 9:22am
Raking, raking, raking. There's always that one tree in the corner that's watching until you're all finished. Then Bam! Here's your leaves. :) Thank you Hashman.
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23rd Oct 2014 6:42am
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23rd Oct 2014 9:23am
Re. Bare Naked Ladies
8th Apr 2016 3:12am
& the modest pines pine to be that bold...as to let it all go & let nature take hold :)
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