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Dark Corners
I see you in the shadows
Lurking on my bedroom walls
At times seeming to be teasingly there
Reminding me of this lonely night
Then I hear your hushed whisper
Deep and commanding
Tell me of your wants
Things you long to view
We both know exactly what your weaknesses are
Regardless, I still love hearing the words
Almost as much as you enjoy saying them
Please.....let me hear them again
Dark corners call out to me
Whether awake or in a dream
I can hear your voice
Dominating my instincts and thoughts
Our trust has grown
You know that I can refuse you nothing
I always want to leave you pleased Sir
How have I done so far?
Lurking on my bedroom walls
At times seeming to be teasingly there
Reminding me of this lonely night
Then I hear your hushed whisper
Deep and commanding
Tell me of your wants
Things you long to view
We both know exactly what your weaknesses are
Regardless, I still love hearing the words
Almost as much as you enjoy saying them
Please.....let me hear them again
Dark corners call out to me
Whether awake or in a dream
I can hear your voice
Dominating my instincts and thoughts
Our trust has grown
You know that I can refuse you nothing
I always want to leave you pleased Sir
How have I done so far?
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Re: Dark Corners
Anonymous
17th Oct 2014 2:49pm
Belle,
A dark, commanding write. Sometimes it's nice to have the voices when the darkness confines us with it's walls :-) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
A dark, commanding write. Sometimes it's nice to have the voices when the darkness confines us with it's walls :-) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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re: Re: Dark Corners
17th Oct 2014 2:54pm
Re: Dark Corners
17th Oct 2014 3:49pm
Oh mmmmmm I feel so at home in the darkness lol
Especially if I can view 'visions' of a lovely wanton woman! lol... Really nice stuff lil lady :)
Especially if I can view 'visions' of a lovely wanton woman! lol... Really nice stuff lil lady :)
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re: Re: Dark Corners
21st Oct 2014 4:30pm
Re: Dark Corners
17th Oct 2014 3:55pm
Dark is there always but when you in love dark turns to be light. Great staff Belle!
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re: Re: Dark Corners
21st Oct 2014 4:32pm
So true RG. Love changes the perspective of almost everything.
Thanx for giving me a read
Thanx for giving me a read
Re: Dark Corners
17th Oct 2014 3:55pm
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21st Oct 2014 4:35pm
Re: Dark Corners
17th Oct 2014 4:50pm
Dark shadows
Creep from the night
Whispering desires
On parched skin
Making them crawl
With silken tones
Wetting folds
For his throne
Taunting thoughts Belle
Creep from the night
Whispering desires
On parched skin
Making them crawl
With silken tones
Wetting folds
For his throne
Taunting thoughts Belle
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re: Re: Dark Corners
21st Oct 2014 4:37pm
Re: Dark Corners
17th Oct 2014 7:54pm
I can tell by your words here written that you're doing just fine LSB. I ued to be fraid of the dark and now I too welcome it.
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22nd Oct 2014 5:16pm
Re: Dark Corners
Anonymous
17th Oct 2014 9:25pm
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re: Re: Dark Corners
22nd Oct 2014 5:18pm
As always darlin i appreciate u takin a lil time to give my stuff a read hun
Thanx so much
Thanx so much
Re: Dark Corners
17th Oct 2014 10:22pm
I got something dark for you-well a dark brown. Lol. Overall sweety it's good ink.
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re: Re: Dark Corners
22nd Oct 2014 5:20pm
Re: Dark Corners
18th Oct 2014 2:15am
weaknesses are desires. desires are dominating forces. you're a temptress w/a subservient tone in this poem, Belle.
I can imagine the shadows caressing you...
I can imagine the shadows caressing you...
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re: Re: Dark Corners
22nd Oct 2014 5:23pm
Weaknesses can b just as dominating hun
He has become mine
Glad u found it such a tempting treat darlin
He has become mine
Glad u found it such a tempting treat darlin
Re: Dark Corners
19th Oct 2014 4:55am
A voice strong and alluring, beckoning your heart for the chance to bring it love and bliss. Very nice Belle.
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22nd Oct 2014 5:25pm
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