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mine mind.
men's minds are like the earth.
mine is like a coal mine;
I'm useful when I burn,
dark, unhealthy and dry,
...tryin'
to one day be
capable of diamonds...
mine is like a coal mine;
I'm useful when I burn,
dark, unhealthy and dry,
...tryin'
to one day be
capable of diamonds...
Published 17th Oct 2014
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18th Oct 2014 5:43pm
Impressive. Great word play. Just dont put too much pressure on yourself to be a diamond and you will just become a diamond! Brilliant!
19th Oct 2014 2:01am
thank you dude! you have a ton of these clean, short pieces, so it means a lot coming from you
