All about Unicorns

I like this, It’s paced out nice, methodical meter , I wonder if maybe there might be a word to replace one of the force with. no biggie I s’pose seeing it reads well as is. the ending is unexpected, finite. I s’pose in the grand scheme of things this poem could be applicable to any number of creatures. a nice short lesson

good stuff, fair play

That is so hard to see sometimes...! Of course of course I have force remorse.  I truly appreciate that.  I had just worked out another glitch just the same.   Thank you.. :)

Oh wait... I did that on purpose to double seem it; reinforcement.  All the same though, I appreciate the honest critique.   I'm leaving now  :)

Nice twist at the end P. I hope all horny creatures aren't bad.

Lots of good and horny creatures out there.  

LOL...

Somehow when I read this title I knew it was going to end well...

So funny, Reita...

thank you Ed, its so good to see you. :)

I've managed to reassure my
unicorn that he's the exception
to the rule,

but my ass is proving more
difficult, stubborn as a mule
he is..:)

I learned a lot of biology through the study of mules/hybrids.  I think that your ass is wonderful.  
 
I just had this thought out and working on it a few days ago, "Curiously Filtered Jackass/Art as Life Project" and so please don't take it personal as to your comment; its just interesting that you mention stubbornness, and so in the spirit of continuity:    
 
If each individual  
had an equal amount of water,  
would there be the same incentive  
for drinking it as now?  
 
Or would they store it away  
knowing they can’t  
survive without its influence,  
 
Would such a condition harm,  
or hinder the average man to know?  
 
How long would he last,  
if he were to be brought about  
with thirst, but still not drink?  
 
To what extent can we judge  
the satisfactoriness of distribution  
by any of the expressionism mentioned  
in the question at the end  
section of the ass  
that is not willing to listen?    
 
 
I don't know, its just funny. I have a video short to go with that if you want to see it.
 

that's really good..:) and of
course I'd love to...

Oh. I've always thought Unicorns are simpaticos??? I guess you've just met one of the black sheep of them :-).

Only an example of disparagement in my own absurd metaphor.   Thank you Miss Chi.. :)

╰☆╮HAHAHA! I was not expecting that last line. XD Awesome!╰☆╮

Thank you Brittany ! :)

yeah so is that damn Minotaur....