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Uhm Idk?
Built on a foundation of pain,
it crumbles in the rain.
Built on a foundation of sorrow,
it'll crumble by tomorrow.
Built on a foundation of anger,
we're all in danger.
Built on a foundation of love,
the house is perfect.
The seams tighter than a glove.
The halls will ring with the sound of love.
Built on a foundation of my life,
your hous will slit its wrist
with a bloodstained knife.
it crumbles in the rain.
Built on a foundation of sorrow,
it'll crumble by tomorrow.
Built on a foundation of anger,
we're all in danger.
Built on a foundation of love,
the house is perfect.
The seams tighter than a glove.
The halls will ring with the sound of love.
Built on a foundation of my life,
your hous will slit its wrist
with a bloodstained knife.
Published 18th Apr 2011
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18th Apr 2011 4:23pm
18th Apr 2011 6:58pm
It's good till the last line.. It was actually really good had different meanings but u messed it up with the wrist thing
18th Apr 2011 7:06pm
19th Apr 2011 00:09am
19th Apr 2011 5:34pm
lol i was bored and i saw a epic house,i took pictures and a dude yelled at meh >.
