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Thoughts Of Them
The thought them together
Makes me feel ill and under the weather
The very idea of him with someone else makes me crazy
Makes me wanna hurl and my eye sight so hazy
Thoughts of him and her float through my head
Of the way he would touch her in his bed
It all makes me wanna cry and scream out in pain
For the thoughts of them together causes me to go insane
I try to get these thoughts to go away
But it seems that they're here to stay
I don't want him to touch me with hands that he touched her everywhere
While before I wouldn't have any issue no I would not have had a care
Now I might deck him if he lays his hands on me
Yeah I'll mess up his face and give him some misery
Makes me feel ill and under the weather
The very idea of him with someone else makes me crazy
Makes me wanna hurl and my eye sight so hazy
Thoughts of him and her float through my head
Of the way he would touch her in his bed
It all makes me wanna cry and scream out in pain
For the thoughts of them together causes me to go insane
I try to get these thoughts to go away
But it seems that they're here to stay
I don't want him to touch me with hands that he touched her everywhere
While before I wouldn't have any issue no I would not have had a care
Now I might deck him if he lays his hands on me
Yeah I'll mess up his face and give him some misery
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Re: Thoughts Of Them
Anonymous
11th Oct 2014 9:12pm
Intense...

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Anonymous
11th Oct 2014 9:18pm
Yeah - it comes through.

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Anonymous
11th Oct 2014 9:52pm
I know the feeling...

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Re: Thoughts Of Them
12th Oct 2014 2:53pm
I know this feeling, hated seeing my ex with another man. Great poem, sorry for your heartbreak
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