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Realm Series 1: Structure
Malkovich (Free-walker's Realm)
Structure
Is what I need;
What I crave.
The other realms have structure...
Why don't we?
Most days of the week,
We just do whatever we want.
Uncivilized.
The only day we have
With structure is
Hunting Day.
Even that doesn't have
A set day of the week, though...
Unorganized.
Structure
Is what I need;
What I crave.
The other realms have structure...
Why don't we?
Most days of the week,
We just do whatever we want.
Uncivilized.
The only day we have
With structure is
Hunting Day.
Even that doesn't have
A set day of the week, though...
Unorganized.
Published 6th Oct 2014
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7th Oct 2014 5:07am
Yeah... I probably should have put an into or something. Or put more up. There are 11 realms the poems that I'm writing are from two different people from different realms. This one's from the Free-walker's realm where there's barely any structure. They're explained more in my notes and in the other parts. I can send them to you if you want. I might end up putting into prose instead where details can be added when needed.
Take the aspect you want to write about and make it your own. Highlight the aspect in your poem.
