deepundergroundpoetry.com

When The Water Freezes

Smack the evil out of my eye
cause it's fixed upon you,

I see

I saw

I know

all I ever wanted
doesn't matter anymore
and with that I'm cool

or is it icy?

Written by nikkimoe

Published 4th Oct 2014

All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.

likes 6 reading list entries 0

comments 6 reads 678

Commenting Preference:

The author encourages honest critique.

Re: When The Water Freezes

snugglebuck

4th Oct 2014 5:37am

Thumbs up.

Read poems by snugglebuck

Re: When The Water Freezes

Vee (Rina)

4th Oct 2014 2:42pm

When i got to the last line, all i thought about the reflection of energy bouncing back with the word icy. Needless to say pretty good affect on the reader. Good one Nikki :)