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The Familiarity of Failure
No need for a life-jacket
if I happen to drown
it was not the seaweed
or the current,
I was just to lazy
and didn't care enough
to swim to the top,
or my subconscious
thought it was
safer down at the bottom...
either way,
carry on...
Sincerely
Self-Sabotaging
Nicole
if I happen to drown
it was not the seaweed
or the current,
I was just to lazy
and didn't care enough
to swim to the top,
or my subconscious
thought it was
safer down at the bottom...
either way,
carry on...
Sincerely
Self-Sabotaging
Nicole
Published 20th Sep 2014
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20th Sep 2014 11:02pm
I like the structure of this poem. How you used short sentences to convey its feelings.
I'm not very good at critiquing work but it was great. :)
I'm not very good at critiquing work but it was great. :)
20th Sep 2014 11:17pm
Anonymous
21st Sep 2014 4:39am
Great strong poem with lots of impact!
Shine on.....
Shine on.....
2nd Oct 2014 7:12pm
3rd Oct 2014 6:18am
Self destruction is an addictive function. But that yields an honest write. Too relatable.
19th Jan 2016 10:31pm
