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Beautiful Angel
Beautiful Angel
you make me wanna kiss
loving you
but
Im a cruel bitch
Your sweet little pussy
i just want to fist
yanking your snow blonde hair
oh yea
your gonna be my freaky whore
i don't give a fuck no more
your innocence
i plan to ruin
a gigantic dildo up your virgin hole
maybe give you a bit of cunt to swallow
a big fat dick to follow
gonna leave your ass dazed on the floor
cause i don't give a fuck no more
soaked in blood and cum
oh yes my Beautiful angel
if only you knew just what im going to do
((i honestly dont know where this came from, told you im not good without being depressed O____O ))
you make me wanna kiss
loving you
but
Im a cruel bitch
Your sweet little pussy
i just want to fist
yanking your snow blonde hair
oh yea
your gonna be my freaky whore
i don't give a fuck no more
your innocence
i plan to ruin
a gigantic dildo up your virgin hole
maybe give you a bit of cunt to swallow
a big fat dick to follow
gonna leave your ass dazed on the floor
cause i don't give a fuck no more
soaked in blood and cum
oh yes my Beautiful angel
if only you knew just what im going to do
((i honestly dont know where this came from, told you im not good without being depressed O____O ))
Published 2nd Oct 2014
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WOAH!! That's really powerful. In Spanish, they would say chocante which comes from chocar which means to collide or crash, so chocante would mean having the force of a collision. It's hard and carnal. It's tangible and can be felt, and when I feel it, its got a feeling of sexuality. It's like a guy wanting a bad girl or a girl wanting a bad guy to take control of them and pound their bodies like a nail into a wall that is pleasure to make their bodies one with pleasure. I like it :) It's twisted and dark, but there is beauty in the untamed and wild, and even darkness is an intriguing element. In the dark, we challenge our fears of evil and learn the bravery of cleaving to an ambiguous form as long as it loves us and fulfills a desire that we have. The darkness is eerie, but it's lovely because it causes us to trust in others and overcome the appearance of a creature and forces us to interpret the virtue of the situation based on one question: Are we getting what we want? If so, then we are finding good in the darkness and are expanding our own philosophies as to include much more than what we previously had acknowledged as good based on what we could comfortably see then. You're a beautiful writer RosieTheGothicKat.
15th Oct 2014 5:39pm
Thank you :3 i was just kinda angry and my more Sadistic side came out, its not my usual description level but i felt it should still be given a chance :) im glad you enjoyed it
Yes, it certainly should be given a chance or that fresh interpretation would be undiscovered or repressed and our experience would not be able to be heard by others, and when someone feels this way, they might feel like they are the only one, but you have spoken and they will be able to hear your voice from another time accompanying them and given them empathy in the darkness.
