roses[it is an old 1]

This doesn't make any sense, and seems more like a bad joke than a poem. I'm sorry but I just can't find any aesthetic value in it. "Violets are blue steel my man then fuck u"? What does that mean?

what the hell is this i have 2 agree this doesn't make any sense! kinda funny though

i am an ametur a new member so go away

yes well i havent been a member for long but you should plan your poems like i do

will do no it alls

there is nothing here, nothing... 'u' instead of 'you.' Steel is a material or a colour not an act of theft. Whether you are new to writing or not, you still have 14 years of experience with the English language.

Judging from the above, I'm due a barrage of idiotic waffle, but if you are here for the presence of poetry and not fucking off the patrons I suggest you listen to any feedback you are lucky enough to receive  

i agree but im just gonna let kora be and give her time to think

cool peeps