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Holy Lie
If there's anything like a holy lie,
I've just told one,
My intention is to make and not break,
But if I let you down...
Words can be very powerful,
But I can't drag you out the pit,
We are caught in the same mess,
Myself I'm six feet deep.
I lied when I said,
Everything will be fine,
All I wanted was for you,
To put your worries behind.
I've just told one,
My intention is to make and not break,
But if I let you down...
Words can be very powerful,
But I can't drag you out the pit,
We are caught in the same mess,
Myself I'm six feet deep.
I lied when I said,
Everything will be fine,
All I wanted was for you,
To put your worries behind.
Published 26th Sep 2014
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26th Sep 2014 3:28am
26th Sep 2014 7:51am
26th Sep 2014 6:04am
Interesting, I would think about moving some of your commas around. Like your ideas, though. This definitely drew me into a d through the whole poem.
26th Sep 2014 7:50am
