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Now I Know
blood on the wall
sliding slowly to the floor
blood framing her face
going into her eyes
leave leave little voices chanted
go away run away little lady run
a fistful of broken teeth
bloody upside down smile
a roaring angry drunk man
exploded his fist on her face
Why won't you walk out the door
he is sleeping now please go go go
Crying into her towel
nine children crying with her
Her man died that day
she was alone strangely lighter
I stayed for all of you
to make sure you will be alright
not bear the anger of a man
who was a loser with an ego
Now I know Mama stayed
because a mother's love
will always be and forever
the greatest of them all.
sliding slowly to the floor
blood framing her face
going into her eyes
leave leave little voices chanted
go away run away little lady run
a fistful of broken teeth
bloody upside down smile
a roaring angry drunk man
exploded his fist on her face
Why won't you walk out the door
he is sleeping now please go go go
Crying into her towel
nine children crying with her
Her man died that day
she was alone strangely lighter
I stayed for all of you
to make sure you will be alright
not bear the anger of a man
who was a loser with an ego
Now I know Mama stayed
because a mother's love
will always be and forever
the greatest of them all.
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23rd Sep 2014 2:16pm
Re: Now I Know
23rd Sep 2014 2:37pm
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a "loser" with an ego; an ego self-abused by alcohol is always dangerous. all within its grasp are subject to its madness..
any escape is always better making lighter the burden.
an arresting read
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a "loser" with an ego; an ego self-abused by alcohol is always dangerous. all within its grasp are subject to its madness..
any escape is always better making lighter the burden.
an arresting read
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23rd Sep 2014 3:14pm
Thank you Kriticool for reading. Yes, drunk and abusive...unfortunately this is a true story, and my mother stayed married to him for 25 years, to his death.
Re: Now I Know
23rd Sep 2014 3:20pm
Wow... Dark imagery if the father
coupled perfectly with the inner strength
n light of the mother... Outstanding my dear
coupled perfectly with the inner strength
n light of the mother... Outstanding my dear
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23rd Sep 2014 3:23pm
Re: Now I Know
23rd Sep 2014 3:31pm
I could only imagine the fear you faced everytime such abuses happen...you can call your Mom a martyr for enduring such maltreatment, but only her knew what was best for everyone. I love the concluding lines:
Now I know Mama stayed
because a mother's love
will always be and forever
the greatest of them all.
Great read Grace...you always shine in your writes.
@EngrVV
Now I know Mama stayed
because a mother's love
will always be and forever
the greatest of them all.
Great read Grace...you always shine in your writes.
@EngrVV
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Thank you so much for reading EngrVV. Its always an honour.:)
Yes, she stayed as a buffer for us...she bore the brunt of his abuse. And we were always scared, everyday.
Yes, she stayed as a buffer for us...she bore the brunt of his abuse. And we were always scared, everyday.
Re: Now I Know
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2014 4:18pm
Another poem based on cruel reality. Sad but at the same time it shows a mother's love and the strength of a woman's endurance. Great work!
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re: Re: Now I Know
23rd Sep 2014 6:10pm
Thank you for reading and commenting Donovan. Very kind words...encouraging indeed.
Re: Now I Know
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2014 5:11pm
Grace,
Yes, a mothers love is like that! Good luck in the comp!
tornado
Yes, a mothers love is like that! Good luck in the comp!
tornado
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23rd Sep 2014 6:08pm
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23rd Sep 2014 9:45pm
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23rd Sep 2014 11:00pm
Re: Now I Know
24th Sep 2014 2:11am
The source of strength brings tears to how it is wrought!!!
Strong, emotive Write Dear Grace!!!
Good Luck in the comp.!!!
Strong, emotive Write Dear Grace!!!
Good Luck in the comp.!!!
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24th Sep 2014 3:24am
Re: Now I Know
25th Sep 2014 1:18am
With a scream and a bang,I close my eyes and I feel your words Grace (peace)
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25th Sep 2014 4:42am