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Read Me
Using knowledgable fingers
He reads my every line
Finding every syllable
Completely and utterly sublime
Writing his own masterpiece
Upon my porcelain skin
Dipping his mighty pen
Deep within my sin
His dripping quill
Always ready to begin
Creating the next chapter
Of our undying erotic dreams
Masterfully guiding the story line
To heighten each of our pleasures
Strong fingers forever creating
Carnal treasures for only me
Oh read me Sir
Let my body tell you a story
Flip through chapters
Until now were left unread
He reads my every line
Finding every syllable
Completely and utterly sublime
Writing his own masterpiece
Upon my porcelain skin
Dipping his mighty pen
Deep within my sin
His dripping quill
Always ready to begin
Creating the next chapter
Of our undying erotic dreams
Masterfully guiding the story line
To heighten each of our pleasures
Strong fingers forever creating
Carnal treasures for only me
Oh read me Sir
Let my body tell you a story
Flip through chapters
Until now were left unread
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Re: Read Me
21st Sep 2014 8:33pm
I really like this poem Belle. The metaphor you used is exquisite. One of your best poems yet.
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21st Sep 2014 9:00pm
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21st Sep 2014 8:44pm
Favourite verses - second, third and last. Like the mix of the physical with the literary.
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21st Sep 2014 9:02pm
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21st Sep 2014 10:02pm
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21st Sep 2014 11:47pm
Well Mr Feddeler ty for the compliment hun
Im a definite open book.....
And rather easy to read
Im a definite open book.....
And rather easy to read
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21st Sep 2014 10:23pm
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21st Sep 2014 11:48pm
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2014 10:39pm
Belle,
Love how you lay wide open your book, inviting us deep into each chapter. I must get the next edition in Braille :-) Now, I must get my nose back into your latest offering....
tornado
Love how you lay wide open your book, inviting us deep into each chapter. I must get the next edition in Braille :-) Now, I must get my nose back into your latest offering....
tornado
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21st Sep 2014 11:51pm
Hmmmm.....well im told im quite the page turner of a read lol
Glad u liked my lil write hun
Glad u liked my lil write hun
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21st Sep 2014 10:49pm
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21st Sep 2014 11:53pm
Means more than u know comin from u darlin
Thanx so much
Yes it was truly inspired n he knows exactly how much he inspires me
Thanx so much
Yes it was truly inspired n he knows exactly how much he inspires me
Re: Read Me
This is a sublime piece, LSB! Beautifully composed and oh so sensual. It sends tingles to all of the right places.The kind of page turner to be savored never wanting to read "the end"
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22nd Sep 2014 00:03am
So happy that my lil write seemed to hit the right spot darlin
Who ever said that this was "the end"?
I have multitudes of chapters left to b written n to b read
Who ever said that this was "the end"?
I have multitudes of chapters left to b written n to b read
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22nd Sep 2014 00:38am
Re: Read Me
22nd Sep 2014 11:39am
I must admit, it's like the best 'book' I'd ever likely
'Read' lol awesomely spilled with sensuality... :)
'Read' lol awesomely spilled with sensuality... :)
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re: Re: Read Me
22nd Sep 2014 1:24pm
Well ty PM sir
This book is full of never ending pages
Scribed by HIM
This book is full of never ending pages
Scribed by HIM
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22nd Sep 2014 6:50pm
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22nd Sep 2014 2:12pm
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22nd Sep 2014 6:51pm
Im humbled hun
Coming from one as talented as you that is quite the compliment
Tham you so much
Coming from one as talented as you that is quite the compliment
Tham you so much
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22nd Sep 2014 6:53pm
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22nd Sep 2014 8:44pm
When romantic reading is done then its time for bondage reading. Great ink.
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22nd Sep 2014 8:51pm
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