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Taking A Look In The Mirror
I Judged too harshly
We all think differently
I wish I had a more logical brain
In which to see the world with
I envy those straight thinkers
I'm dreamy and illogical
I pointed the finger at some one else
All the while being condescending in nature
For all i've been through
It seems I have a lot to learn
Have some real heart
Point the finger at myself
Take a good hard look in the mirror
Maybe learn something about my fellow man
We all think differently
I wish I had a more logical brain
In which to see the world with
I envy those straight thinkers
I'm dreamy and illogical
I pointed the finger at some one else
All the while being condescending in nature
For all i've been through
It seems I have a lot to learn
Have some real heart
Point the finger at myself
Take a good hard look in the mirror
Maybe learn something about my fellow man
Published 15th Apr 2011
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15th Apr 2011 3:16am
15th Apr 2011 3:22am
15th Apr 2011 3:30am
you have a great way of putting honesty into poetry.
i think allot of people can take a lesson from this (me included)
nice one!!
i think allot of people can take a lesson from this (me included)
nice one!!
15th Apr 2011 3:43am
thank you for the beautiful comment and add to your reading list..it's very appreciated..peace Crim :)
15th Apr 2011 9:39am
i like its self analytical nature. it really shows a great struggle and shows who you are. a defining poem that i can relate to all to well. keep up the good work
15th Apr 2011 9:46am
Thank you for the kind comment and encouragement it's really appreciated..peace Crim :)
