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Explanation point
Explanation point:
~ Sincere promise: Hostile appetite ~
Never, ever did I expect things to go this far: I fell in love, I once despised that word
You raptured my mind; and took me far away from the dark, cold, bleak, emptiness- of my everyday
You’re so calm and you try so hard to always say the right thing: you turn my storms into sunny days
I was not ready, I was not ready, I was not looking: BUT NOW!! I LOVE YOU! I CRAVE YOU! I NEED YOU!
I cannot be without you-I hunger for everything you say . . . I am enslaved
~ Tender tribulation: Overwhelming torture ~
Every second not with you: is anguish, to my soul
The torment, of being without the one who understands you; and accepts your crazy mind
You make me, complete and whole
The universe knew you were here for me
Your essence breeds life; to my once sullen existence
~ My affliction: My disgrace ~
Maybe from giving up, losing hope, and lack of desire: I don’t know
Ugliness has overwhelmed me: my failing
This thing I hide from your eyes: I feel makes me unworthy
I cannot let you see me, this way
So I hide behind a veil: I wait hidden, and concealed
~ Intense ferocity: To get me back to being . . . me ~
I am an artist, I cannot see with my eyes, I am blind and I choose to love you: I am not superficial, please never think this, as I struggle with myself
You could not disappoint me; I have seen your magical beauty
However you are a man, you deserve to have a lovely lady on your arm and baby that’s what I will be:
I want to present to you many gifts wrapped up inside of me, all my talents, all my passion, all my love
And a sexy body
Lori
~ Sincere promise: Hostile appetite ~
Never, ever did I expect things to go this far: I fell in love, I once despised that word
You raptured my mind; and took me far away from the dark, cold, bleak, emptiness- of my everyday
You’re so calm and you try so hard to always say the right thing: you turn my storms into sunny days
I was not ready, I was not ready, I was not looking: BUT NOW!! I LOVE YOU! I CRAVE YOU! I NEED YOU!
I cannot be without you-I hunger for everything you say . . . I am enslaved
~ Tender tribulation: Overwhelming torture ~
Every second not with you: is anguish, to my soul
The torment, of being without the one who understands you; and accepts your crazy mind
You make me, complete and whole
The universe knew you were here for me
Your essence breeds life; to my once sullen existence
~ My affliction: My disgrace ~
Maybe from giving up, losing hope, and lack of desire: I don’t know
Ugliness has overwhelmed me: my failing
This thing I hide from your eyes: I feel makes me unworthy
I cannot let you see me, this way
So I hide behind a veil: I wait hidden, and concealed
~ Intense ferocity: To get me back to being . . . me ~
I am an artist, I cannot see with my eyes, I am blind and I choose to love you: I am not superficial, please never think this, as I struggle with myself
You could not disappoint me; I have seen your magical beauty
However you are a man, you deserve to have a lovely lady on your arm and baby that’s what I will be:
I want to present to you many gifts wrapped up inside of me, all my talents, all my passion, all my love
And a sexy body
Lori
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