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Outer Limits
Thunder powers in on tall clouds
Eternally followed by his echo
Commanding force ever present
Each night at this time
Nudging me to join him
Swimming through percipitation
Fallen due to him
Giving waterfalls rebirth
Cleansing away all doubts
The past no longer exists
During these stolen moments
Only he is there
Thunder rolling through the sky
His echo by his side
Lead by his static pull
Needing to absorb more
Climatic explosions burst
The heavens erupt
Thunder and echo unite as ONE
Celestial fireworks
Eternally followed by his echo
Commanding force ever present
Each night at this time
Nudging me to join him
Swimming through percipitation
Fallen due to him
Giving waterfalls rebirth
Cleansing away all doubts
The past no longer exists
During these stolen moments
Only he is there
Thunder rolling through the sky
His echo by his side
Lead by his static pull
Needing to absorb more
Climatic explosions burst
The heavens erupt
Thunder and echo unite as ONE
Celestial fireworks
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Re: Outer Limits
13th Sep 2014 7:42pm
Fireworks in the sky. Two heavenly bodies making love. Nice! Great write Belle.
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2014 11:12pm
Belle,
Love the fireworks in you words!
tornado
Love the fireworks in you words!
tornado
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re: Re: Outer Limits
15th Sep 2014 8:32pm
Must say hun
Those r also my favorite lines too
Thanx for stopping n to give it a read
Those r also my favorite lines too
Thanx for stopping n to give it a read
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14th Sep 2014 2:33pm
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21st Sep 2014 00:34am
You capture well the awesome power of nature. The piece is also alluringly romantic. I am a cloud lover, gawd knows my heads in them enough :) Thank you for this inspiring piece!
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21st Sep 2014 00:41am
I love the sky.....
And all u find in it
A nature lover to my core
Without its many offerings
All of my favorite things would b lost
And all u find in it
A nature lover to my core
Without its many offerings
All of my favorite things would b lost
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21st Sep 2014 00:52am
The clouds are awesome where I live in TX. On my bus trips home from work I'm constantly snapping pics of inspiring cloud formations.
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