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clouded mind
My mind is full of useless information.
There is no room for any other formation.
Numbers, faces, names and dates.
Bones, muscles, cells and blood.
Clogging my thoughts like mud.
I cant think.
I cant talk.
I cant remember.
Nothing but a clouded mind.
There is no room for any other formation.
Numbers, faces, names and dates.
Bones, muscles, cells and blood.
Clogging my thoughts like mud.
I cant think.
I cant talk.
I cant remember.
Nothing but a clouded mind.
Published 14th Apr 2011
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14th Apr 2011 6:15am
27th Apr 2011 1:26am
yeah i like this allot lesangelwi.
i like that it switches between free verse and rhyme.
nice one !
i like that it switches between free verse and rhyme.
nice one !
1st Jun 2012 5:05am
save the Periods(.)!!! why? nice theme n idea. a bit reach-ie for tempo/ryhm.. OK
