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She has brunette curls
Moonlight so close and so bright for you, a glow with a blind.
Spooning those beautified curves from behind.
Silky waist submits, pressed against mine.
Finger tips gliding milky white softness.
Freshly scented sweet brunette curls
fill my dormant loneliness.
Nights alike now cold many obsolete...
You are right, intimate issues unresolved
and uncontrolled...
Heartbroken expected, Yes I am wrong
Still I yearn for you in lonely tears
that stain my pillow of a million "I love You"
Published 10th Sep 2014
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2014 2:24am
What a beautiful surrender and opening your heart. Really like this! :)
10th Sep 2014 2:35am
10th Sep 2014 5:37am
That last line really hit home. Can really feel the empty sadness in your thoughts of a loved one. They always seem so close and yet so far when we really need them. Great work, keep it up and stay strong my man.
10th Sep 2014 6:11am
Thank you For Understanding Man....your encouragement is gold!...and I totally agree with you...so close and yet......
Peace bro✌
Peace bro✌
10th Sep 2014 7:05am
Awe this is truly a beautiful piece... I so enjoyed the heartfelt movement of its character...
Still I yearn for you in lonely tears
that stain my pillow of a million "I love You"
My favorite lines... Amazing :)
Still I yearn for you in lonely tears
that stain my pillow of a million "I love You"
My favorite lines... Amazing :)
10th Sep 2014 7:11am
Hehehe Yeah that's so encouraging of you...so sweet thanks a million lolz xoxo
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- Edited 22nd Dec 2014 9:35pm
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