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If True Love Burns
If water was time
I'd drink it
If you were mind
I'd think it
If true love burns
I'd risk it--
I'd risk every thing
If snowflakes were eyes
I'd blink it
If you were the sky
I would cry
Because you and I
Are wingless
If true love burns
I'd risk it--
I'd risk every thing
I'd drink it
If you were mind
I'd think it
If true love burns
I'd risk it--
I'd risk every thing
If snowflakes were eyes
I'd blink it
If you were the sky
I would cry
Because you and I
Are wingless
If true love burns
I'd risk it--
I'd risk every thing
Published 8th Sep 2014
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8th Sep 2014 6:26am
BoFantastic, luv :-* ~
This poem is intense and lovely, full of passion's quiet, yearning depths. Yet quietness does not denote silence; this poem fair shrieks with impassioned salvos.
Exceptional, consummate expression, luv. :-*
This poem is intense and lovely, full of passion's quiet, yearning depths. Yet quietness does not denote silence; this poem fair shrieks with impassioned salvos.
Exceptional, consummate expression, luv. :-*
8th Sep 2014 7:35am
My favorite part is the 'id risk it part' it's great but that stood out most to me
30th Oct 2014 6:18am
