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I rented a room @Dup.com
So I rented a room last week @Dup.com
Did you know it comes with free poetry
and a view.....
My first night at the Inn I ventured
downstairs, hey? did anyone know
Madame Lavender opened a Bar & Grill?
I also hear the good Doc, gives free
medical advice too "/
A few regulars were scattered about
some were having drinks while others
were dancing enjoying the cool menthol stylings of John Feddeler, who was at the piano playing My Way from Sinatra.
So,
I pulled up a stool and knocked back a few Souladareatease,Poetikmind and Xmar82 were discussing and debating their own points of views.
Hashman, Lance,and Sadsmilles were all laughing it up, waved for me to come join
the convo already in progress.
"They' good peeps like that."
Some of my gal pals walked in
not long after I got there
Flowergirl,Crimsin,and Enigma,
and oh yes, ScarlettA came too
Johnrot, came by for a frosty few,
alongside CraicDealer,Roachmill
and Poetspeak,who drank vodka,
"cause he don't like beer "/
I have been up for almost 1 1/2 weeks
with less than 1 hour or two a day worth of sleep, I am as manic as an Eskimo with a heater. I have acute insomnia since I checked in last Monday. I am as Bipolar as Bananas in Pajamas and that stupid fucking purple dinosaur.
DUP,
I raise my cup,
please take a bow
best insomnia Hotel around.
Note: This was spawned from my insomnia
and the inspiration is from Madame Lavender who wrote a story about Dup a few years back ")
Did you know it comes with free poetry
and a view.....
My first night at the Inn I ventured
downstairs, hey? did anyone know
Madame Lavender opened a Bar & Grill?
I also hear the good Doc, gives free
medical advice too "/
A few regulars were scattered about
some were having drinks while others
were dancing enjoying the cool menthol stylings of John Feddeler, who was at the piano playing My Way from Sinatra.
So,
I pulled up a stool and knocked back a few Souladareatease,Poetikmind and Xmar82 were discussing and debating their own points of views.
Hashman, Lance,and Sadsmilles were all laughing it up, waved for me to come join
the convo already in progress.
"They' good peeps like that."
Some of my gal pals walked in
not long after I got there
Flowergirl,Crimsin,and Enigma,
and oh yes, ScarlettA came too
Johnrot, came by for a frosty few,
alongside CraicDealer,Roachmill
and Poetspeak,who drank vodka,
"cause he don't like beer "/
I have been up for almost 1 1/2 weeks
with less than 1 hour or two a day worth of sleep, I am as manic as an Eskimo with a heater. I have acute insomnia since I checked in last Monday. I am as Bipolar as Bananas in Pajamas and that stupid fucking purple dinosaur.
DUP,
I raise my cup,
please take a bow
best insomnia Hotel around.
Note: This was spawned from my insomnia
and the inspiration is from Madame Lavender who wrote a story about Dup a few years back ")
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 7th Sep 2014
| Edited 8th May 2024
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Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
7th Sep 2014 4:22am
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Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2014 4:42am
7th Sep 2014 4:41am
Luv luv luv it!! You are classy my Sweet Chick! Thank you for the mention, am honored to call you friend. Party with you anytime. I raise my cup to YOU and all our cool friends on DU!! Cheers!!! Luv ya! Xo :)
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re: Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
7th Sep 2014 5:19am
Free ribs and crab cakes all around!
Thanks FG I am glad you liked it!
Broomie
Thanks FG I am glad you liked it!
Broomie
Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
7th Sep 2014 4:50am
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7th Sep 2014 5:09am
I put you in there too but it didn't stick so i fixed it.
That's how tired I am... John you are one of my strongest supporters, I can always count on you for contact!!!
please read it again...
I'll try and get some sleep I promise..
Luv
Broomie
That's how tired I am... John you are one of my strongest supporters, I can always count on you for contact!!!
please read it again...
I'll try and get some sleep I promise..
Luv
Broomie
Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
7th Sep 2014 4:59am
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I gave you Vodka, plus you
a bore, NEVA that! ;)
Glad you liked!
Luvs you!
Broomie
a bore, NEVA that! ;)
Glad you liked!
Luvs you!
Broomie
Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
8th Sep 2014 00:38am
Haha! A party in DUP-land! Nice write, and always enjoyable to read stories with a bunch of us in them!
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Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
8th Sep 2014 8:04pm
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8th Sep 2014 8:20pm
Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
8th Sep 2014 9:15pm
WOW SWEETS I Loved it!!!
Great ink From my Jackie!!!
Can I have this? Oops Too Late!!!
Adored the read!!!!
FUNNY AS HELL!!!
Awesome job!!
Sir Lancelott
Great ink From my Jackie!!!
Can I have this? Oops Too Late!!!
Adored the read!!!!
FUNNY AS HELL!!!
Awesome job!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
8th Sep 2014 10:04pm
"D I'm glad you liked and enjoyed this
((((((((((((((Lance)))))))))))))))))
Muah
Broomie
Thank you for the RL btw !
((((((((((((((Lance)))))))))))))))))
Muah
Broomie
Thank you for the RL btw !
Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
9th Sep 2014 5:09am
Aaawww my sweet Broomie! Yea it sounds like
one hella party at hotel DUP, n I for one
am happy I invited! Hope u left some room on the bed for me lol...
one hella party at hotel DUP, n I for one
am happy I invited! Hope u left some room on the bed for me lol...
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9th Sep 2014 6:57pm
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10th Sep 2014 00:26am
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10th Sep 2014 1:08am
Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
12th Sep 2014 11:25pm
It was a great night Jackie. I hope to see you there again. Next round is on me. Awesome write Jackie.
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re: Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
12th Sep 2014 11:36pm
((((((((Xmar)))))))))))))))
So glad you liked this, yeah we all had a great time @Dup.com "D
Okay next round is on you, I look forward to it Brother <3
Always
Jackie
So glad you liked this, yeah we all had a great time @Dup.com "D
Okay next round is on you, I look forward to it Brother <3
Always
Jackie
Re: I rented a room @Dup.com
14th Sep 2014 2:07am
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14th Sep 2014 2:29am
Re. I rented a room @Dup.com
18th Aug 2015 1:20am
This is the second poem I've read this week that seemed to tell a story with other DUPers...the first one was so crazy, my first reaction was "Dafuuuuq??" :P This one isn't so nutso, but it got me wondering if there was some sort of weird competition going on that I hadn't seen.
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Re: Re. I rented a room @Dup.com
18th Aug 2015 1:34am
Hi, not that I am aware of...
Although this was entered in a comp today hosted by LSP
you entered too.. i wrote this last year...
thanks for the read ')
Zazzles
Although this was entered in a comp today hosted by LSP
you entered too.. i wrote this last year...
thanks for the read ')
Zazzles
Re: Re. I rented a room @Dup.com
18th Aug 2015 2:01am
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17th Dec 2015 5:49pm
Re. I rented a room @Dup.com
22nd Jun 2017 12:39pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition for July, '17. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9685/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9685/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet
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23rd Jun 2017 11:13pm
Re. I rented a room @Dup.com
7th May 2024 11:57pm
Re: Re. I rented a room @Dup.com
8th May 2024 00:06am
oh yeah, it’s old alright. I just had to fix the placement, but it was funny at the time.
Thanks for looking and leaving your thoughts Fia
Jackie xoxo 🤗
Thanks for looking and leaving your thoughts Fia
Jackie xoxo 🤗