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The Shower
Daily she would take her shower
and once she was in the midst of bath
daily he would purposely cut the power
And she would come out
with foams of soaps shouting
while daily he would see a voluptuous body
wrapped in a skimpy towel
and once she was in the midst of bath
daily he would purposely cut the power
And she would come out
with foams of soaps shouting
while daily he would see a voluptuous body
wrapped in a skimpy towel
Published 5th Sep 2014
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5th Sep 2014 10:52am
I've seen this picture. That white towel was a sign of my surrender to mi reina.
Cool ink.
Cool ink.
5th Sep 2014 1:43pm
5th Sep 2014 11:27am
i think this poem was soooo unfinished you could have created sooo much with those powerful lines and you stopped and added this erotic picture...to me...poetry is soo much more than that
8th Sep 2014 11:36am
8th Sep 2014 1:00pm
