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Feed Me
My heart hangs
On your every word
Thirsting for the
Pleasure of the sweet music
Coming from your loving heart
They feed my soul
The nourishment it needs
To stay happy, dancing and
Alive to carry me forward
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
Your sweet words
Feed me
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
On your every word
Thirsting for the
Pleasure of the sweet music
Coming from your loving heart
They feed my soul
The nourishment it needs
To stay happy, dancing and
Alive to carry me forward
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
Your sweet words
Feed me
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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Re: Feed Me
3rd Sep 2014 11:39pm
Well now, aren't you just the cutest, you old softie romantic! Nice touch Xmar!
enjoyed this very much
Always Broomie
enjoyed this very much
Always Broomie
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Re: Feed Me
4th Sep 2014 2:35am
great write xmar....
you have a way of writing which makes the person reading think its written just for them....
a beautiful ability..... :)
you have a way of writing which makes the person reading think its written just for them....
a beautiful ability..... :)
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4th Sep 2014 6:29am
Oh my my X.....i hope she keeps u well fed too babydoll
Loved this write hun
Hugs
Belle
Loved this write hun
Hugs
Belle
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 10:23am
Lovely serenade!

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5th Sep 2014 00:07am
Re: Feed Me
5th Sep 2014 2:59am
Ah, xmar82, luv :-* ~
This whole poem, so seemingly painstakingly crafted, a meticulous masterpiece out of the whole of its wonders, I find myself drawn over and over to one particular phrase:
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
There is something about this section and what immediately follows:
Your sweet words
Feed me
You have said it all here, whatever needs to be said is contained, in truth, right here.
Hold tightly to one another, luv. :-*
This whole poem, so seemingly painstakingly crafted, a meticulous masterpiece out of the whole of its wonders, I find myself drawn over and over to one particular phrase:
Headstrong into the face
Of this debilitating world
There is something about this section and what immediately follows:
Your sweet words
Feed me
You have said it all here, whatever needs to be said is contained, in truth, right here.
Hold tightly to one another, luv. :-*
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6th Sep 2014 7:22pm
Yes exactly, I derive the strength from her loving words. Glad you enjoyed it. Stop in any time.
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5th Sep 2014 12:11pm
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7th Sep 2014 3:33am
Impressive write! Soothing words and so graciously written and expressed. Enjoyed!! Xo :)
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