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positive affirmation generation
We are the positive affirmation generation
Forsaking reality for a feel-good quote
To starve off the loneliness
And avoid looking at our own reflections
In the hope that positive thinking will hold
More weight than actions
And change our lives
In ways that we can't or won't
Some days it is not enough
To be kind or good
With the hope
Of a lasting reward
(C) Indie Adams 2014
3-9-14
30 Day poetry challenge Day 3
Forsaking reality for a feel-good quote
To starve off the loneliness
And avoid looking at our own reflections
In the hope that positive thinking will hold
More weight than actions
And change our lives
In ways that we can't or won't
Some days it is not enough
To be kind or good
With the hope
Of a lasting reward
(C) Indie Adams 2014
3-9-14
30 Day poetry challenge Day 3
Published 3rd Sep 2014
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Holly Fuck! Indie you nailed it!
Smacked the write and the lesson right outta the park.
Truer words I have not read on a page, because I've only ever seen some or other quote that is meant to change my life!
Awesome Stuff!
Smacked the write and the lesson right outta the park.
Truer words I have not read on a page, because I've only ever seen some or other quote that is meant to change my life!
Awesome Stuff!
8th Sep 2014 9:59am
Wow! Thank you very much Alistair for your awesome feedback. I'm so glad you can relate. :D
