Forget Me

You're not forgotten Benji..I feel your pain..please put the razor away and keep your pen you have a lot to say in a meaningful way..I'm wishing you peace..Crim

thank you crim,it means alot.  i kinda dont know why i wwrote this.  today has been weird and i had to speak......>.

Two misspellings: "writing" and "forget." This piece is pretty mundane really; it could use some spunk, or really any reason at all to read it. Try using some metaphors and imagery, and writing about something less generic than "that cutter in the corner with a notebook."

mmmkay and i know. it was kind of a spur of the moment poem,but apperently made you want to read so thanks ya ;)

this poem is perfect as is..theres no need for spunk of any kind...and how this poem was writen still gives a good emotion to it...simple and well writen in my opinion..

Great and meaning full peice dude...

Good one reminds me of a song r.e.m loosing my religion I used to listen to that over and over when I was a kid.. Really good now this is different then your others it reads differently I like it my fav of yours

thanks all of you guys,it means alot.

i like this one because a know the feeling of needing to get it all out...its not that its about cutting but the emotions that matter