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What Loves Look Like
I'm truly looking for myself..
for only I know me well..
Well enough to know..
What I'm looking for isn't in someone else..
Fooling myself to think there could be another half of me..
Yet faith has to forgive me..
Seeing that all hope is gone..
for only I know me well..
Well enough to know..
What I'm looking for isn't in someone else..
Fooling myself to think there could be another half of me..
Yet faith has to forgive me..
Seeing that all hope is gone..
Published 2nd Sep 2014
| Edited 3rd Sep 2014
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3rd Sep 2014 7:14am
This is thought provoking bc few of us understand self happiness should come first ...
... Note: forgives to forgive
... Note: forgives to forgive
3rd Sep 2014 12:28pm
I think we all just need someone that understands us, so we can say "finally you get me!". Thanks for the words and the correction.
3rd Sep 2014 12:08pm
3rd Sep 2014 12:31pm
Anonymous
15th Oct 2014 7:31pm
This is very true and thought provoking. It wasn't what I was expecting from the title, but it was very well executed.
16th Oct 2014 12:38pm
