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L.S.D.
I am no longer trapped in my head,
My mind is now in the world around me.
Looking down, I can see my arms breathe--
Glowing clear energy flowing in and out
Of them as I struggle to understand.
I don't feel oneness with the universe,
Just anxiety over my walls melting.
I keep trying to make it to the
Fridge to grab a beer but I always
End up on the wrong side of the kitchen.
I must of lost track of my movements and
Now I'm lost in my own fucking home.
My friend keeps telling me he can
Read my mind but I don't believe him.
If he could, he'd grab me that beer.
Screw the beer though,
Hendrix is putting on a show inside
My poster and he is really killing his solo.
I'll just stay and watch this for awhile.
I've heard you're supposed to find God on this
Stuff but honestly, that sounds a little too
Awesome for ten damn dollars a hit.
My mind is now in the world around me.
Looking down, I can see my arms breathe--
Glowing clear energy flowing in and out
Of them as I struggle to understand.
I don't feel oneness with the universe,
Just anxiety over my walls melting.
I keep trying to make it to the
Fridge to grab a beer but I always
End up on the wrong side of the kitchen.
I must of lost track of my movements and
Now I'm lost in my own fucking home.
My friend keeps telling me he can
Read my mind but I don't believe him.
If he could, he'd grab me that beer.
Screw the beer though,
Hendrix is putting on a show inside
My poster and he is really killing his solo.
I'll just stay and watch this for awhile.
I've heard you're supposed to find God on this
Stuff but honestly, that sounds a little too
Awesome for ten damn dollars a hit.
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Re: Psychedelic Liz (written for Psychedelic Man comp.)
I love where you take us, your audience, each time you touch a keyboard or pen to paper...or whatever avenue you utilize. I send you light and love young poet... and of course anything out of your fridge you fancy ;)
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2nd Sep 2014 11:34am
am so glad you write AH..you take your audience with you..every step of the way.... :)
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2nd Sep 2014 11:45am
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14th Sep 2014 3:33am
Ten dollars a hit! My goodness, inflation these days! I heard it said some while ago that the worth of your soul is the cost of whatever an acid hit goes for from the local dealers...
Well, the Soul is probably definitely Worth a lot more than that...
"I am no longer trapped in my head,
My mind is now in the world around me.
Looking down, I can see my arms breathe-- Glowing clear energy flowing in and out
Of them as I struggle to understand.
I don't feel oneness with the universe,
Just anxiety over my walls melting." - good stuff, keep it up.
Well, the Soul is probably definitely Worth a lot more than that...
"I am no longer trapped in my head,
My mind is now in the world around me.
Looking down, I can see my arms breathe-- Glowing clear energy flowing in and out
Of them as I struggle to understand.
I don't feel oneness with the universe,
Just anxiety over my walls melting." - good stuff, keep it up.
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26th Sep 2014 5:09pm
This was a great comment man. I like the soul being worth the cost of an acid hit thing. Thats pretty cool. I'm glad you took the time to read and comment, thanks man!
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8th Oct 2014 6:35am
Ten dollars a hit! My goodness, inflation these days!
That was good...:)
That was good...:)
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3rd Nov 2014 6:07pm
OH MAAAAAN I LOVE THIS WRITE
Feel it down in my soul....
been there with some of thoise same reflections
XOXO
Fire
Feel it down in my soul....
been there with some of thoise same reflections
XOXO
Fire
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5th Nov 2014 5:11am
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26th Nov 2014 3:57pm
Oh AH I can so relate. This was a trip i took several times when i was 19 & 20, Grt write. Thanx for takin us along hun
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