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the spread
i crawl into you
i eat you
touch you inside
and out
i invade you
hide in you
i change you
i corrode you
i kill you
i eat you
touch you inside
and out
i invade you
hide in you
i change you
i corrode you
i kill you
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Re: the spread
1st Sep 2014 4:01pm
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Re: the spread
1st Sep 2014 4:56pm
sounds like ebola... but sexy ebola.
sorry i'm stoned but digging your flow mister hash
sorry i'm stoned but digging your flow mister hash
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1st Sep 2014 5:04pm
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2014 5:05pm
sounds like life from the viewpoint of big pharma...it has depth with enough left out to make so many meanings possible, even love could sing this song..
lovely piece, hashman :) shine on
lovely piece, hashman :) shine on
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1st Sep 2014 7:13pm
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2014 8:27pm
slow death inside out.
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1st Sep 2014 10:02pm
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1st Sep 2014 11:12pm
Re: the spread
2nd Sep 2014 00:28am
Wow, the imagery is so crisp
it left me with chills! awesomely expressed bro.
it left me with chills! awesomely expressed bro.
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2nd Sep 2014 00:44am
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2nd Sep 2014 1:48am
Truly the plague of today...it has taken most of my family members...perfect capture Hash!!!
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9th Sep 2014 7:44pm
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2014 5:54am
This is a dramatic side to you. Interesting! Xo :)
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9th Sep 2014 7:46pm
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